Me, with Two Bodies

I'm truly speechless. Anyone who can say this is a copy of other works must be a primary school student. Ten years ago, online novels were full of characters starting with god-tier gear, and the equipment included old men and women. Would you call that plagiarism? Just because the beginning is similar doesn't mean it's plagiarism. Show me a book from the same era as "Battle Through the Heavens"—aren't they all about the "rejected engagement and comeback" trope? It's not complete plagiarism; "Rhapsody" just used this theme first, like "Battle Through the Heavens." What's wrong with later authors using the same theme?

When I first saw this book, I immediately associated it with "After Transforming into xxx". I read a few chapters, and well, it's not bad. I think the author's writing isn't bad, but author, you can't omit the details! At the beginning, I saw the time travel, and then I woke up to find a girl, and it was me! I was surprised for a moment... And then what?! And the village section, whether it's the dialogue or the fight scenes, it always felt like something was missing. I always felt like the village only had a few people. They could have written more about that. Also, being attacked by a tiger and then exhausted!? Even if you have kidney deficiency, it wouldn't happen that quickly... Falling into the water... Well, that's normal, and there's also hunger...

Can it still be updated even though it's already finished?

The author... Whether it's the protagonist or the minor characters, they all feel like the same person. And the villains are too one-dimensional; they basically just drool over women and start fighting the protagonist. And the good guys who help the protagonist are so naive—the protagonist saves them (or helps them), and they immediately give them a national treasure without hesitation. I hope the author can make the characters more complex, more comprehensive, and more diverse. [Conflict is the root of struggle] This root isn't just about superficial desires and hatred. The author could start by looking for points of conflict within humanity, nations, and ethnicities...

The first two chapters of the side story will be released first. This side story is a collaboration with a new work, but it is not directly related to the new work. The new work is still under development and will be released later.

By the way, let me give you a sneak peek at the preview for this book. It's also a dual-body story, and the theme is about the concept of the dream world. Interested readers, please look forward to it! I'll hone my writing skills and try my best to provide a good reading experience.

Extremely rare self-marriage harem type, but unfortunately the female lead indiscriminately offers too much fan service, regardless of her partner.

The female protagonist is hard to describe; she's not only naive but also incredibly carefree, not even surprised that she was sold out.

Later on, they just came up with some reason about reincarnation and did *that* to themselves?

This cover is an eyesore!