This Demon Lord Won't Fall for the Saintess's Gentle Trap

Oh my god, I found out at the end that it was the author of the weapon; I can't bear to read any further.

What I hate most are those writers who start critiquing everything halfway through a story. If you really can't handle it, why don't you just write it yourself? Wanting everything is just messing with the author's mentality. They have so many demands; where in the world is there any writing that's absolutely perfect?

This is the first time I've ever hated the "pure love" label so much. That wicked woman, Iserline, should just be a loser, biting her handkerchief next to Rosa and Mo Wan.

I was reading it when I realized something was off, so I quit and checked the author's work. I was horrified!

The last few chapters are much better; the protagonist isn't so Liu Shan anymore.

The last few chapters have been a bit toxic. The protagonist becomes the Demon King, but he has no power, no strength, and no wisdom. An entire dialogue consists of someone talking to the Demon King, followed by the Demon King saying things like, "Okay, fine, I understand, I'll do it." It's making me sleepy. If this continues, it'll be a disservice to the readers. Author, you need to revise this; at least give the protagonist some authority in governing the country.

Having read up to chapter 17, I dislike the saintess's aloof and manipulative character. Will there be a plot twist later? If not, then so be it.

This saintess still maintains a hypocritical and sanctimonious demeanor, as if she were sacrificing her own family for the greater good. The storyline, which involves manipulating a demon princess, is still labeled as "pure love," and it makes me feel very uncomfortable.

I hope the pursuit of the protagonist takes longer, instead of just Iselin apologizing for deceiving him and making some pretentious promise about truly loving him from now on, only for him to forgive her like a love-struck fool.

The Vesa arc will be an insurmountable mountain for the author himself. That plot and romance were simply divine, one of the best I've ever read in my decades of reading. No exaggeration, I genuinely wanted to cut off my own head and offer it to the author so they could write another chapter with a romance as powerful as the Vesa arc.