The Introverted Mom Doesn't Want to Be the Sunny Sunflower of a Popular Girl

Your plot is a bit melodramatic, but your abstract writing style compensates for that. Separating the two parts might lose the book's comedic essence. The best approach now is to maintain the abstract style while increasing the update frequency.

This cover... I remember my friend only found out they were disbanding at this concert.

I've been severely mentally polluted, like I've drowned in some Jianghu (a Chinese online literature platform) female-oriented novel. Where did this come from? Is this still a pineapple bun?

The academy arc ended so quickly, who's going to fill in the missing synopsis part for me?

This is so hard to hold back, what kind of rubbish is this?

Pure emotion combined with a straightforward plot and a brilliant author.

Your biggest problem is that you're creating key characters in the same way you would create villains. If the characters aren't likable, the novel won't have a happy ending in the eyes of readers. Because the happy ending you're trying to write will just be seen by readers as the villain getting their way and the good getting what they deserve.

The latest chapters haven't been sweet enough, can you please restore some sweetness? 😡 They're too normal, they lack flavor, and it's unsatisfying to read.

The synopsis is deceptive; he's clearly a powerless golden-haired dragon, not even as good as a capable hero.

Show some maternal instincts, I want to see some close-up shots of her and her daughter.