Pure yuri
After her confession to the heroine is rejected, Qian Surou suddenly realizes that she has transmigrated into a yuri dating sim.
She's become the heroine's tragic best friend from the original story!
The game's plot hasn't started yet, and knowing she has no chance with the heroine, Qian Surou decides to let go. She'll be a good friend and make the girl she once liked happy, instead of being a lovesick wreck.
But being a best friend isn't easy.
In the story, all the characters pursuing the heroine imagine her as a rival. In real life, the author's malice weighs on the poor best friend until she can barely breathe.
A deadbeat dad, a sick mom, and a cold little sister.
The life she's inherited leaves Qian Surou completely worn out.
Just as she's exhausted and searching everywhere for a part-time job, a character who doesn't exist in the original appears before her.
"The people you go on dates with are all women, right? So why can't I?"
"Don't worry, Xiao Qian. I'll keep it a secret for you."
"I've changed my mind. If the person you like finds out about the job you've been doing in secret, what do you think she'll say?"
"Oh, I forgot! She's busy flirting with other women right now. She doesn't care about you at all, Xiao Qian!"
"Other women are fine, but I can't be?"
"Hey, Xiao Qian! Let me comfort you. I would never betray you."
"Forget about her and be with me!"
"You can use me as a substitute."
"Who's making you feel excited right now, me or her?"
Little by little, Qian Surou realizes that everything that's happened has been building toward this.
She only wanted to be friends, but she keeps falling deeper and deeper, until there's no going back.
I'm not very talented, but your descriptive style is indeed a bit difficult for me to understand. I don't really think this is what's called "good writing." I originally came to talk about this, but seeing everyone praising your writing as Level 1 made me give up on asking you to revise it, haha. The emotional descriptions are also a point of praise, but I have a different opinion. Maybe it's my problem, but I'll still say it. As for the two younger sisters, it doesn't seem like they're looking for substitutes, it seems like they're starving. To put it bluntly, it's just padding the word count and forcibly creating a CP (couple pairing).
The younger sister is like a roadside character in this ecosystem; to be honest, it's like a silver-level player getting mixed up in a high-level, competitive match.
The writing is delicate and moving, and the emotional descriptions are quite vivid.
The author's writing is definitely not that of a novice; the style is quite good, and the plot is handled very smoothly. The emotional scenes are described with great subtlety. From the protagonist's handling of the awkward situation at the beginning, it's clear the author's skill is considerable. One could say this author specializes in romance; they could even write scripts for short plays and still find an audience. The attention to detail in this story is excellent, even showing hints of mystery. The protagonist's awareness of small details is a very distinctive feature of the story. Another point I appreciate is that the author doesn't insert much psychological description during character interactions...
So that's why she pushed the protagonist away. Hopefully, the prison guards will put in more effort to torture Prison Discipline, until she really loses sight of the protagonist and finally wakes her up. [Sfem:21:735]
This is insane, so twisted, so extreme! My god, this is the epitome of stand-in literature, how did you, author, manage to write something like this?
Haha, so even level 1 isn't qualified to comment now? Instead of looking at my level 1, look at my level 5 VIP and the fact that my first comment was in 2018. They're just too lazy to upgrade after the level system reform. I think I'm still qualified to comment even if it's from 2025.
Having read over seventy chapters, I suddenly realized that Lao Jin had been cultivating a new relationship with Xiao Qian, never bringing up the past, while Lao Ji rejected Xiao Qian with the ridiculous excuse that he wasn't "Xiao Ji," ignoring their long-standing relationship. The difference in their behavior was immediately apparent.
What kind of brain-dead logic is it for two sisters to get together?
I think the author's writing style is good, but they like to use long descriptive passages and often condense information into a single sentence within a paragraph, which makes it a bit confusing to read. Also, the idea that the protagonist's sister and the female lead's sister are each other's meal substitutes is a bit far-fetched.
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