Stop Acting Cute, I'm Not Your Heroine!

Although the blood-covered back is quite painful, when will the female lead be able to regain a smooth back that's so flawless it would be a shame not to get cupping done?

Why did you have to create a clone that's a perfect replica of the protagonist in every way except for the bra size? It's not that you can't write from other people's perspectives, but having the audience watch someone who isn't the protagonist wearing the protagonist's face and doing things that the protagonist wouldn't do just make them feel out of place, understand? How much impact would simply making Cuiyue's image more like the suit Cuiyue than Jiang Jianyue herself have on your outline?

The latest chapters are terrible. People come for sweet moments and action, not political infighting. Furthermore, Kujo is a character barely mentioned in the earlier chapters; his sudden appearance and acquisition of power is baffling. The male lead, in these chapters, comes across as an incompetent husband, doing nothing but apologizing.

Honestly, I don't really understand how you authors manage to write novels that are both erotic and entertaining, yet not strictly related to imperial uncles, and still not get banned. Isn't this a skill shared by all authors? 😰

Forced to accelerate and cut plots is an unavoidable part of literary works, just like how the biggest problem in "The Case of Chen Shimei" was how to suppress the audience's anger and not execute Chen Shimei prematurely, just like how you have to be careful of bullets when acting in "The White-Haired Girl". Moreover, this villain is portrayed in a truly disgusting way.

Yuuki seems too indecisive right now. He panics over a simple apartment rental issue and immediately apologizes at the slightest provocation. While I understand the author intended to portray the protagonist's growth, this feels a bit overdone. Besides, the book is almost 400,000 words long, and he had his moments of brilliance and charisma in the early stages. How did he transform from a gentle, lovable protagonist into a cute, puppy-like character?

How could they come up with such lousy ideas as the hen card and clones? Wasn't the earlier plot quite good?

When will this Nine-Tailed Fox die? I came here for a sweet romance novel 🤤, not for some hen-like nonsense 😅

The author probably wanted to change the current situation where the young lady is far stronger than the young male protagonist, hence the author's eagerness for so-called "growth," even creating a delusional villain like Kujo. However, given the young lady's current feelings for the young male protagonist, creating difficulties for him is a slap in the face. As a prince consort, any effort she makes seems somewhat ridiculous. Giving the male protagonist a growth arc truly requires an opportunity where the young lady is forced or actively stops acting as his mother (the timing is...). The most ridiculous part of the recent plot is the family's meddling, like the solution in the latest chapter: "Kill you, so what? What's your status? What's mine? What's your strength? What's mine? It's completely absurd..."

The last few chapters have been getting worse and worse.