I Paid the Price for Bullying a Magical Girl

I feel like I've been cyber-twisted.

This description is just kidding me, Thunder!

Crotch literature disguised as magical girl

You know what? The beginning was so disorganized that I lost interest in reading the later chapters. I skipped a few and found there wasn't much difference, no exciting moments, just some twists and turns, which made it very uncomfortable to read. And then there was that little bull in the middle—I'm speechless. "Pure Love"

Just a heads-up, the main character will be hit by the solar corona in next Monday's update...

Is this considered a poorly written story? I feel like I wasted my subscription, but at least it didn't have a bad ending.

My short review got deleted after a long time, so I'll just write a long review to get my first hit (just kidding). (Spoilers ahead) I've never seen this kind of subject before, it's quite a twisty read. First of all, congratulations! For a new author's first book, this is pretty good. Let's talk about the writing style. It's average, not amazing, but not as unreadable as some others. So, let's get straight to the book's biggest strength: the novel subject matter. The reunion story and the moral conflict that goes against ethics perfectly capture what people want to read in this oppressive era. While I admire the author's boldness, I'm also a little worried for you, since GL works are particularly averse to male characters' behavior (...

Also known as: The Love Story of Two Rascals

If there were someone who could talk, it wouldn't have dragged on for so long.

Let me tell you all, the big reveal will happen around chapter 150 at the end of the volume.