I accidentally transmigrated into a power-fantasy novel about a female protagonist, as a trashy villain. In the original story, Lin Nuo was doomed to brazenly provoke the heroine, Feng Aotian, for no reason, then get crushed again and again, nearly ending up selling himself for a living.
He swore to change this miserable fate!
What? If I get Feng Aotian to seduce the princess who is my fiancee, I can avoid taking the blame and enjoy a lovely life lying flat!
What? The princess is a Water Saint Elf with a special constitution? If I steal a book that serves as her sacred relic, I can implant suggestions in her mind and control her actions!
Lin Nuo was overjoyed, and that very night he sneaked into the sleeping princess's bedroom.
But the plot's development was completely beyond his expectations!
What! You mean:
I nervously felt the princess all over, inside and out, but she'd actually deliberately put her sacred relic in my hands long ago?
What!! You mean:
I made all these preparations so I could avoid the heroine when the story began, but she'd already been obsessively following me before the plot even started, despite her outwardly refined and beautiful appearance?
What!!! You mean:
Even after staying on guard against suspicious pretty girls for eight whole years, I was still being fervently watched by a yandere girl lurking in the shadows?
Lin Nuo wiped away his sweat.
"Impossible!"
"Absolutely impossible!"
"As a blond villain, I will never be pursued by the heroine!"
Lin Nuo continued wiping away his sweat. "But... why has Feng Aotian started looking at me strangely lately?!"
The pineapple bun's environment has been taken over by lilies and bridesmaids. Come on, get your original space back! It's up to you!
I've already started writing the second volume, the "Yandere Hypnosis" arc, in my drafts. If we're focusing on nurturing books during this crucial ten-day period of intense competition for recommendations, It's like I've already taken my pants off, and then when I really want it, you guys just won't come in, sob sob... I hope you'll follow along as much as possible. If you recommend it well, I'll have more passion to write the second volume of "Yandere Hypnosis," and then my hands can stroke the keyboard more quickly, making it emit more melodious moans. (Ahem... Don't get the wrong idea that it means faster typing)
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Ugh…! To be honest, this is the author's first book, okay? It's another one of those weirdos pretending to be a newbie. Anyway, let's talk about the book's strengths. 1. The characters are very well-defined; it doesn't feel like many characters are just different skins. 2. The pacing is smooth; there aren't any forced, unexciting moments. 3. The logic of everyone and everything makes sense; currently, only the reason the male lead decides to save the female lead is a bit lacking (but this conveniently balances out his earlier behavior, which is a pleasant surprise). 4. The male lead is intelligent and calm, and the female lead's love has a reason. Although the protagonist was a bit cowardly at the beginning, the latest chapters…
Leaving a footprint, just in case my work goes viral someday.
A few thoughts
I've been using the Pineapple Bun platform for many years, and there are so few truly excellent works, especially in recent years. The shift in the prevalence of yuri (lesbian) stories has almost wiped out male protagonist novels… This author's writing style is a rare find on this platform. Although there were some minor issues at the beginning, they were resolved within a chapter or two. The author has excellent pacing, advancing the plot smoothly and without dragging, avoiding any tediousness. After reading the author's preface, as a fellow student, I deeply admire the author for finding time to write amidst their busy academic life. I hope the author won't abandon the story. Although the current state of the platform makes it difficult for male protagonist novels to stand out, I still hope…
Dude, isn't this a way to get the male lead to take the initiative without making him stupid? After that, remember to stick to one storyline until they become lovers before moving on to the next female lead's route. Otherwise, constantly writing halfway through and ending up disappointed, without any positive emotional feedback, feels like being tossed around like a fish – it's pure torture. A harem novel shouldn't be written like a pseudo-harem novel!
The plot is completely copied from a popular BLB novel, featuring a blond-haired villain, and the original female lead's arrogant and powerful character has been ruined...
I suspect it was written after reading the story of the blond villain in "Transmigrated into a Phoenix Overlord".
Putting everything else aside, this Phoenix Overlord's character is completely rotten, utterly despicable. She threatens the protagonist who saved her life, shows up uninvited to someone else's banquet to freeload, and even tries to intimidate the protagonist. She constantly says Emily belongs to her, treating Emily like a mere object, and shows no respect for Emily's personal will. For this character to have a reversal later on, she has to keep suffering setbacks; any success she achieves is disgusting. [Sfem:3:305]
I still stand by my opinion: the emotional development and interactions are excellent, ranking among the best in the genre. Princess Sesser's subtle thoughts are fantastic, and Yuri's various reactions are both funny and endearing. The male lead performs admirably even when facing near-desperate circumstances. The emotional progression and initial physical contact are well-executed. I hope this work will become a masterpiece in the transmigration/overpowered protagonist genre.