Reborn as the Daughter of My Ex-Girlfriend and My Rival

I've seen the latest update. I usually don't comment, but I feel I have to say something. I understand the female lead's inability to let go, because I also had an ex-girlfriend I was with for 6 or 7 years who broke up with me and got married about a year later. Honestly, I don't hate my ex-girlfriend. How can you hate someone who was there for you through the most difficult years of your youth? Although I don't hate her, it doesn't mean I'll continue to love her. While I understand the female lead's feelings, I can't accept her attitude. It makes me feel like the female lead was reincarnated to atone for her sins, but honestly, is she really guilty? And frankly, her death in her previous life was also related to her ex-girlfriend...

I think the author should write some side stories about Shushu growing up first, otherwise I feel like we won't see him as an adult until 2030.

Disclaimer: All eyes are on me!!! I have an announcement!!! Lin Jinshu is a clown, I'm truly guilty, why did I even read this novel!!! It's all my fault for being interested just because I saw the "marriage change" tag, I deserve to die! At first, I was really attracted by the author's delicate writing style, although it was a bit painful to read. I liked Lin Jinshu and Yun Shu's love for Jiang Xun, which kept me reading. But!!! Up to chapter 87, Jiang Xun's love for Yun Shu??? I don't understand what kind of feelings this is??? I really can't understand why a girl like me who has never been in a relationship read this novel!? Ahahaha, I don't want to say more about Jiang Xun...

Yun Shu's refusal to give Jiang Yu her virginity after eight years of dating suggests she's a rational person. Wouldn't a rational woman consider compatibility from the start? Since the author seems to enjoy writing such realistic stories, let me elaborate on something even more realistic and heavy—completely illogical. A rational person wouldn't have considered the protagonist's sensitive nature from the beginning. Perhaps she was initially interested, but would have broken up within a year, let alone eight years. Was she blinded by love? But Yun Shu is truly extraordinary. It's hard to imagine the author's mental state when creating such a character. Even Jiang Yu is more mature than the author...

To sum it up first, after 66 chapters, this book should be renamed "My Parents' Love Story." I understand the author's intention to gradually develop the protagonist's character, and the overall plot consists of mundane, everyday details of life, with a lighthearted writing style. However, judging from the protagonist's behavior so far, there's been absolutely no growth; aside from blushing, he's mostly just spacing out. The supposedly heartwarming family interactions feel jarring. I can accept a slow burn, but I can't tolerate a large amount of meaningless and uncomfortable plot points. Returning to the story itself, the synopsis clearly states that the protagonist's "love rival" wants her to marry someone else, and the title also highlights this conflict. So I believe...

A day in a book is like a year in the real world.

I want to see Jinshu... Can I go to kindergarten now?

The author updated? Really?! 🤨 Holy crap, they really updated! (Trying not to laugh) Author: I didn't slack off, I really didn't slack off, I really can't stand it if you keep saying that! (Smug)

The brush dances across the years... O soul, return! 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 O soul, return... I urge on the long whip and rein in the six reins... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 O soul, return... I sing as I cross the mountains... Return... O soul, return... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 O soul, return! Sing a triumphant song and triumph! We await our comrades to give their all! 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥 Soul, come back!

First, the plot drags on. In the first 120,000 words, there's virtually no development of the protagonist. The three essential elements of a story—the protagonist's goal, the protagonist's difficulties, and the methods used to achieve that goal—are all too vague. Who is the protagonist? Is the whole family the protagonist, or is it just the young master? Often, several chapters feature only supporting characters, which is a major flaw. The characters lack depth; they seem to exist solely for the sake of the story. Whether it's the mother, father, or the protagonist, their motivations are insufficient. This writing style is suitable for short stories; in a longer work, all the problems I mentioned above will become apparent.