Junior sister: "Senior Brother, Yun Wuya slays demons with a single strike of his sword. He teaches me swordsmanship, and even the way he wipes his sword is so handsome!"
Shen Qinghan: "Master, that damn man is deceiving my innocent junior sister again!"
Master {smirking}: "Han, all men are lecherous. I have a way to help you win your junior sister back!"
Master {pulling out a little dress}: "Put this on and use my cultivation technique. Then you can break them up!"
A few years later,
Shen Qinghan, now hailed as the number one immortal beauty in the cultivation world: "You said we were rivals in love. Why are you trying to win me over?"
Rival swordsman Yun Wuya: "Give me a kiss, darling. Come snuggle up to me."
Looking at the rival who once stood before her, Shen Qinghan is overwhelmed by despair.
Damn you, Master! Your guide to cultivating as a green tea had no effect at all. And why didn't you tell me that the stupid technique you made me practice would turn me into a woman?!
Her miserable {blissful} journey begins: she set out to win her junior sister back, only to be won over by her rival instead!
To put it bluntly
I'm Shennong, and I'll start with the conclusion: If you can't handle the Nantong plot, you can skip this. There's too much of it, but there are a lot of updates. The overall plot quality is average, but it's passable because it's comedic. The character designs are ridiculous; the supporting characters are all incredibly eccentric, and their assigned plot points are all disgusting. Furthermore, the author completely failed to grasp the female lead's psychological changes before and after her transformation. It's unclear whether the author intended to write a gradual transformation, a dual-body transformation, or a direct transformation. It feels like there was no outline at all; it feels like the author just came up with an idea and wrote it. As for the essence of the marriage subplot, I'm sorry, I didn't feel it. If you call it pure love, adding Xie takes up a lot of space; if you call it marriage subplot, the whole thing...
The latest chapter does indeed have many flaws.
I've seen the latest chapter. Well, it's supposed to be a lighthearted, gender-swap story, but it has a lot of toxic and frustrating flaws. 1. From the beginning, it's been constantly belittling the male body and elevating the female body. Su Jiuge, the male lead, who knows the inside story, uses this trope, and bystanders push the female lead's gender transformation progress. But in the latest chapter, even the junior sister and sect leader come to criticize it. What did the male body do to offend these two? 2. For a gender-swap story, Nan Tong has too many yuri elements. People are reading about gender transformation, not a rainbow-colored collection. 3. Aside from the male and female leads and the master, the other characters' personalities are too hard to break. Liu, a gender-swapped blond guy, easily tricked the junior sister. Do you remember the protagonist's purpose was to prevent the junior sister from being betrayed? Thanks...
It's just that there's a scene involving Bai and Nan Nan, so why did my comments disappear? It's not like I'm lying.
There are too many drug-related details.
This is one of the few cultivation-themed romance novels I've read to the end. The writing is decent, and the plot is clichéd but still enjoyable. However, what I can't accept is the repeated use of drugs and the excessive amount of scenes favoring Nan Tong. It's incredibly off-putting. The author must know the target audience for this kind of story. One or two instances are forgivable, but repeatedly including such obvious Nan Tong-related scenes is unacceptable. I saw the author's apology in the latest chapter, but I don't understand why, given so many people's dislike, the author didn't just immediately remove Xie Changyi from the story instead of simply reducing his screen time? Well, I can only conclude that...
Interesting premise and twisted relationships, but the story is riddled with flaws, both in terms of romance and marriage.
I have so much to say, so I decided to write a book review. I'll write about each character separately because the twisted nature of many characters exceeds my tolerance level; perhaps some people will still like it and find it interesting. But I've already reached my limit, and since it's already a paid chapter, it seems reasonable for me to say a few words. The book's strengths lie in its lighthearted and humorous daily life, coupled with many appropriately overpowered plot points. While the female lead's backstory is somewhat clichéd, it's effective and makes you eager to see how it unfolds, how the male lead plays his part, and ultimately how he wins her heart. Furthermore, the character designs and interactions between the male and female leads have been quite fitting so far, with some unconventional pairings...
Update tonight, my darlings.
Why haven't you updated again?
Who understands the feeling of redemption when you wake up to find three extra chapters?
Tomb sweeping cat
The Secret Realm chapter was so boring, it felt disjointed.