"Getting Out of the Cave Is Easy If You Just Don't XX" "A Lily-Wrecker, Just as Her Name Promises" "Becoming the Release for Junior Sisters Who've Been Suppressing Their Desires for a Century Isn't So Hard" "Getting Captured and Ravished by the Medium-Cup Fairy, the Large-Cup Fairy, and the Extra-Large-Cup Fairy Isn't So Bad" "What the Hell, You Mean They're All Fragrant, Soft, Proud Heroines' Daoist Partners?"
"So, is this why you rounded up my master and all my good friends?" Feng Aotian pinned Lu Chen in a corner, asking with a hostile expression.
"No, listen, let me explain..."
"That's not what I want to hear."
"Huh?"
"I mean... do you have to make me be the last one?"
The author should take a look at what they are writing. You wrote that the two junior sisters were infatuated with the male protagonist for three hundred years, but after realizing that the male protagonist was just someone else who looked like him, they not only fell in love with him, but also flirted with him. Is this the same kind of character you wrote? Isn't this just putting a green hat on yourself?
What kind of rubbish is this? They've already taken their clothes off, and then the male lead says he hasn't thought things through and decides to back out? If he hasn't thought things through, what's with the ambiguity? Did he waste his two lifetimes? They've created a male lead who's like He Xue, hypocritical and self-righteous.
Is the concept of "dating partners" different in this world? How come the male lead doesn't feel there's anything wrong with being intimate with so many people? Or is it because he's solely focused on building a harem that he shows no resistance? Doesn't he experience any mental strain or transition towards having a harem? Don't these female leads have any desire to possess the male lead exclusively? Everyone here seems to have incredibly advanced thinking!
Dude, is every single sentence filled with descriptions of scenery and characters? It's seriously ruining the reading experience and making me feel really uncomfortable. This is the most outrageous thing I've ever seen.
This description is just full of jokes; you can't find any real information in it.
Isn't this apprentice thing a bit too abstract? You're already obsessively attracted to the male lead, and now you're going to kiss and look at someone just because they look similar, but whose other details you've confirmed are different? What was the point of the male lead deliberately putting on those exaggerated gestures? I'm not entirely sure what your idea is; so far, this is just a bit cringeworthy.
The current viewing experience is terrible. The main characters are pretentious. If you want to eat, just eat. Even though they have clear feelings for each other, they are ambiguous and hesitant (referring specifically to Shen Yue). They have already done the last step, so what else is there to say about not knowing each other well enough? They only take action but don't do the last step. I don't understand why they are leaving the last step for them.
Masked and gruff, kissing without confirmation was truly a slip of the tongue. The author wouldn't listen to advice either; deleting those lines about the stolen kiss wouldn't have affected anything, but they insisted on leaving them.
There are too many female leads. Readers of this kind of story are basically just feeling nauseous and morally reprehensible. What's the point of not depicting Shen Tiao's relationship with his apprentice?
I really appreciate the white-haired girl, so I rewarded the author with a "Little Lolita Heart" gift worth 100,000 Fire Coins.