It's Not Funny That the Defeated Sword Saint Was Turned into a Maid by the Blood Princess
战败剑圣被血姬变成女仆这不好笑
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 9mo ago
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After reading 60 chapters, it feels like this is all for the sake of the white-haired dumpling, who's been embroiled in this jealous scheme, and he's even using the Sword Saint's identity as a pretext for this. Good luck to this dumpling!
The protagonist seems to have lost his intelligence too quickly; it's hard to imagine he was a sword saint before.
The portrayal of the saintess is a huge problem.
Seeing the Holy Maiden really made me lose my temper. I originally just wanted to see the mother and daughter being affectionate. Although the synopsis listed the characters, this development is too fast. It feels like the protagonist has been sold out. Anyone could tear them apart for fun. Although her identity hasn't been revealed yet, her mother couldn't possibly be completely indifferent. She wouldn't be completely oblivious to her mother's movements just for training. That single description of the Holy Maiden successfully turned her from a scheming Holy Maiden into a slut. Deliberately dragging things out for the sake of the affectionate scenes is real CS (Counter-Strike), a total green tea b*tch. Even without that line, the later change in attitude due to the protagonist's love would have been better than immediately labeling her as evil.
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As a casual author (myself), I have a small suggestion: although the protagonist's silly, cute, and mama's boy persona is quite appealing, remember not to overdo it. It's hard to pinpoint exactly what's wrong, but it just feels a little strange. (And remember, don't skimp on the seductive parts!)
The more family-oriented comedic interactions from the earlier versions were much better. The purely cheesy, one-sided interactions after the release just became boring. The entire "Pineapple Bun" game uses these overused elements, which is far less appealing than a straightforward main storyline with some comedic moments.
The females aborted too quickly... That's not fun anymore.
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The protagonist is so easily defeated (I've read up to 100 so far). First, he was silenced by his sister, then he was easily provoked by the saintess and gave up. Fast forward to the carnage, I want to see rivers of blood! 😡😡😡
Even after all this, the author still won't directly state that she's their mother. It feels a bit awkward, and I don't understand why they're dragging this out.