She lost the student council election to a noble heiress, but never noticed the heiress's twisted affection?
The academy's ancient magic promises the winner one wish, and that madwoman used such a precious opportunity to force me to become her spouse?
With a contract rune branded on her neck, Elua became the heiress's captive in front of everyone.
"Guh... It's only for one year... Even if I give in for now... what can you do to me?!"
The silver-haired girl had tears in her eyes, but a defiant light still shone in them.
"Such a disobedient girl." The yandere heiress grabbed her by the throat and lifted her chin. "But that's all right. I'll make you obey me completely... I'll make sure you remember this feeling for the rest of your life... until you take my shape..."
As poor Elua was toyed with in the palm of the heiress's hand, the others could no longer sit by
Her clubmates kept finding excuses to clasp her hand
The girl who worked as a reporter for the school paper often found herself alone in a room with Elua under the pretext of an interview
Her most trusted friend pinned her to the bed with tears in her voice, forcing her to choose between that person and herself
"No, stop fighting! You're all my wings!"
"What did you say?" The yandere heiress's voice rang out, carrying a frightening smile. "You have always belonged to me, and only me..."
A few thoughts and what I consider to be the downsides
Writing about romance against the backdrop of aristocratic oppression of commoners is somewhat inappropriate; many authors, including Pineapple Bun, suffer from this problem. If you're going to write about romance, then your setting should serve the romance. What's the point of creating such a background with such prominent class conflict? You can't just say it's a tool for young lovers to flirt, can you? I think using such a serious setting to write a story about a commoner girl falling in love with an aristocrat is utterly absurd. How is this setting any different from those stories about going back to the Republic of China era to become a warlord's wife? Or are you trying to add some depth to the story with this setting? I think for such a serious story background...
Your novel feels like a KKE (King of the KKE) fighting guerrilla warfare in a remote mountain village, vowing to dedicate everything to the revolution, while simultaneously flirting with Wang Guojun and becoming lovers with a high-ranking officer. Either you should write less about class conflict and just write some sweet moments; or you should clearly depict the struggle, instead of fighting against the aristocracy while simultaneously being a lover of one.
It felt like it started strong but then declined, with a noticeable drop after chapter 30.
Don't waste my five monthly votes, you jerk! 👊😭👊
Where is this transformation?
Damn it, didn't I come here for a twisted plot?
Author, was the protagonist male or female before transmigrating? If female, why the transformation symbol? If male, it's impossible to tell; the previous life description only mentions a high school senior, and she's referred to as "her."
Having finished the latest chapter, my overall impression is that the author seems to be trying to highlight the two main characters by portraying everyone else as inferior, making the female lead seem less childish and the rich girl less of a culinary genius. As for the effectiveness… well, it's only so-so. At least the negative feelings it evokes far outweigh the intended message. It's a pity the plot was poorly arranged. By the way, I personally predict this will be a 1v1 story; there's no possibility of one-on-many relationships.
Baka, I really need to control you 😭
Does this idiot author not even read the comments section? Are they even going to update? 😭😭😭