As a legendary adventurer in my previous life, I was betrayed by my party right before we were about to clear the dungeon?
It turned out that the teammate I'd trusted all along was the real Demon King of the dungeon.
Reborn in the body of a priestess hundreds of years later, I was rescued from the brink of death by a kind Hero. But why is the Hero's teammate the very Demon King who killed me in my previous life?
I wanted to warn my savior in all sorts of subtle ways not to become the Demon King's pawn. But the Demon King seemed to have noticed something, too.
"She was my target at first, but for some reason, I'm becoming more and more interested in you. There's something familiar about you~"
I'm done for! If the Demon King discovers who I really am, she'll definitely kill me, right?
Wanting to stay out of trouble, Gloria can only cling ever closer to her savior. But it seems the other girl has gotten the wrong idea.
"Gloria... Once we've cleared the dungeon, will you be with me?"
Lady Hero! Has no one ever taught you not to jinx things at a time like this?
Then one day, Gloria discovered the Hero's plans.
"Priestess, if you tell anyone my secret, you'll be in big trouble."
(Main character is the bottom, 1v2)
The author is clearly a novice; the writing style is slow and disjointed, and the plot progresses slowly. In fact, readers won't get the first half hour they expect.
It feels like we've reached chapter 30 already, and I haven't even seen a hint of a synopsis yet!
It's bland and tasteless, neither enjoyable to watch nor worth discarding. The revelation of identities is bland, the emotional scenes are bland, and suddenly I don't know why I'm watching it. Then I skipped around, becoming even more confused.
I wanted to read the synopsis about a 1v2 love triangle, but the romance is progressing too slowly. When will I finally get to read the synopsis instead of reading a dungeon crawler story from a Japanese light novel series from over a decade ago?
I started reading this book after Rocco finished it; if Rocco is abandoned, I won't read this one at all.
Having been murdered in her past life, she is now being manipulated and had her memories played with using the most vicious mental magic, though it has no effect on the protagonist. You can forgive that?!
The pacing is so slow; it feels like the story is constantly rambling about irrelevant things. The crucial point is that even the two supporting characters who appear later are described twice in their dungeon raids, while the main characters are only depicted once. There's absolutely no synopsis to this!
Good heavens, the readership has increased and exceeded the word limit! Every word I write adds a little over 1 point to the readership. I need to update faster!
To explain, my mom and I bought a golden retriever puppy on Sunday. That night, the puppy caught a chill, and today it has been coughing and gagging frequently all day. So, my focus has been on dealing with the puppy's problems, but we still haven't solved them.
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