The Young Marquis Only Wants to Become a Sword Immortal

There are too many long sentences, the main body of the sentences is not clear and concise enough, some descriptions are not polished or arranged, and they are completely based on the author's associations and blurts. The resulting long sentences are difficult to understand and seriously affect the reading experience. If the author wants to convey the ethereal and graceful quality of the writing, they should refine the vernacular style as much as possible, leaning towards a semi-classical style. Currently, the writing in this piece feels like an over-the-top, hodgepodge of styles that doesn't quite fit in. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Isn't this maid going a bit too far? Even if she's meant to be lively, she shouldn't be this unruly! Giving her money and family martial arts techniques—anyone who didn't know better would think she's the main character. Even a man would be better, right? Men usually become more disciplined and careful after experiencing hardship, but this woman is completely useless.

After some thought, since we're adding extra chapters to celebrate the book's release, let's all have some fun together. There won't be any bounty events; until March 15th, there will be four chapters a day. (P. S.: Dear readers who are currently waiting for the book to be released, please stop doing that.)

I enjoyed reading it. But there absolutely has to be some romance. Otherwise, if otaku invade your book reviews, you won't be able to read them. The writing is passable; you can work on it. But if the plot takes a wrong turn, it's beyond repair.

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Author, feel free to be creative! Young heroes adventuring together is still the way to go; the ladies are just part of the story. 😡 As long as there's no one like Yin Zhiping, it'll be fine.

I absolutely love this book! It's totally my style, and I can't get enough of it! Keep updating, and I'll give you lots of monthly tickets and rewards!

This kind of story about passionate young people supporting each other, adventuring together in the world and building deep bonds is very rare on Pineapple Bun. However, it seems that the author tends to stretch out the romantic storylines. So far, it's not clear which female character the male lead has truly fallen for. But it's written this way, and I don't feel anything is wrong with it. The young people are just having fun fighting, which is awesome!

While the writing is decent, the actual content doesn't quite match the synopsis. The synopsis alone doesn't suggest this is a classic adventure story, and those who read it based on the synopsis might be disappointed. Moreover, it's almost the third volume, and none of the characters mentioned in the synopsis have any significant roles.

At first glance, it looks like it was written by a potato.