After Faking My Death, I Was Hunted Down by Yandere Girls

Well, actually I kind of regret ending this book too early; I could have written more.

The more I think about it, the angrier I get; the jailer cat should come out and get a beating.

Overall, it's not bad, but the plot needs more development, and some characters aren't portrayed deeply enough. Let's start with the protagonist, Luo Xinmei. As the protagonist, Luo Xinmei clearly becomes rather weak under pressure. Perhaps this weakness is to protect her swordsmanship, but as the plot shows, before her supposed death, Luo Xinmei was a sword immortal for tens of thousands of years. Even if she were to compromise for the sake of her swordsmanship, the character is still a bit too... Weak. Even when the swordsmanship she was protecting was about to be lost, I think her reaction wasn't intense enough. Next, let's talk about the first one, the disciple Jiang Yuzhu. Although she...

Shouldn't the loss of swordsmanship directly lead to the loss of purple clay, emotions, or soul? Now it feels like swordsmanship is just so-so, not that important at all. It's better to have followed that extraordinary disciple; it feels like he's a completely different person.

It's infuriating! Just send some random character to destroy the protagonist and then brutally defeat him. I used to hope for a happy ending, but now I need a bad ending already. Constantly whipping the protagonist is no longer enough; hurry up and give me something even harsher to crush him.

The next update should be a 4,000-word chapter, which is equivalent to two chapters, meow. Future updates should be 3,000-4,000-word chapters.

The plot feels somewhat contrived, as if the author initially aimed for a twisted relationship before developing the storyline, resulting in some plot and character inconsistencies and a relatively short length. However, it's rare to find a work that offers this kind of reading experience, making it a worthwhile read.

Is the "healing" tag responsible for luring people in and then killing them?

To be honest, I kind of want to see the three female leads continue to manipulate the protagonist, coaxing her into supporting his research if she meets their demands. They try to use love to influence the protagonist, making him dependent on them and winning his affection. Then, one of them can't resist and breaks the ice, forcing the protagonist to seek new love, turning into a yandere and capturing all of them, subjecting them to harsh discipline.

The protagonist has a good birth, like a cat. Author, keep writing!