"Eldest Senior Brother, you're Master's direct disciple. How come you're still only at the third level of Qi Refining? I joined the sect last, and I'm already at the ninth level. I'm almost ready to establish my Foundation!"
"Eldest Senior Brother, you have to work harder! Let your little junior sister help you cultivate tonight~"
In the room, Chu Yuan looked at the innocent, romantic, and pure little junior sister. A cold smile touched his lips, and his gaze was full of pity.
Almost ready to establish her Foundation? Heh, looks like this eldest senior brother will have to find a new junior sister again.
Foolish little junior sister, how could she know that the female demon... no, his immortal fairy of a master, loves nothing more than girls at the Foundation Establishment stage?
Clatter! The door swung open.
The white-haired master came in uninvited and said, "Disciple, I saw that your lamp was still lit. I thought you might have run into some difficulties in your cultivation. How about talking them through with me all night?"
"How could I refuse an invitation from Master!" Chu Yuan replied righteously, sitting on the bed and clutching his blanket tightly.
The master and disciples talked all night, resolving many difficult cultivation problems. All three people in the room benefited greatly.
The most normal novel is actually at the very bottom [sfem:3:315]
Your book would have performed at least 4 to 5 times better if it had been published on QD.
In typical cultivation novels, the characters' intelligence levels fluctuate wildly.
After reading over a hundred chapters, all the other characters combined don't have as much screen time as Brother Gu. The junior sister and master barely have any scenes; they're all just flirting with Brother Gu all day. The book title would be more fitting: "Brother Gu Takes Me on a Treasure Hunt."
The author must be Xiao Chunan, always focusing on strange and unusual things.
The pacing is too slow. The protagonist only reached Foundation Establishment stage in chapter 70, while everyone else in the group has already reached Golden Core. His master has already crossed the seventh realm of immortality, and the protagonist won't catch up for another 100 years?
I'd like to ask what the relationship is between these two people with the surname Xiao?
Looks like it was sent. Ugh, the environment is so bad these days.
I recommend checking out qd; the writing is too plain, but the content, writing style, and plot are genuinely good.
I feel like I could write it in QD now; the pace is indeed slow.