Watch Closely, This Is How You Become a Celestial Slave!

From the male protagonist's perspective, this book is a revenge story that even gender-swaps the enemy into a lesbian relationship. However, since it's usually read from the female protagonist's first-person perspective, it becomes a story where you feel sorry for her, but since she's also a perpetrator, you feel sorry for the male protagonist, who is also a victim—it's incredibly painful.

This cheap master is really damn awful. He has no resources and doesn't teach anything. The protagonist has to learn everything on his own. Isn't this just pure birth?

The title and synopsis attracted me to this novel. I started reading because it seemed interesting, but I couldn't continue after chapter 24. First, it felt like the female lead's "Sword Heart Clarity" was some kind of personality modifier. After it shattered, her character development felt completely messed up. Before she achieved Sword Heart Clarity, her best friend still betrayed her. On one hand, the author claims the female lead is a bad person capable of betraying her best friend, and on the other hand, after her Sword Heart Clarity shattered, her personality was directly corrected, making her a weak and submissive character. Then there's the male lead, who does the most twisted and disgusting things, yet the author tries to portray him as a good person. I think a person should be analyzed based on their behavior, not their psychology...

I finished reading it in three days straight. To be honest, the beginning was good, a bit awkward, but overall the book felt rushed and anticlimactic. The ending, where the two have a fight, discover they're pregnant, and then suddenly reconcile without any explanation of the process, dialogue, or psychological changes—it felt so abrupt. I don't know if the author simply didn't want to write anymore or was constrained by their current writing style. I hope this will be improved in future installments.

Couldn't you just remove this master? I'm asking you, which part of the plot absolutely requires this master? What he did was no different from Lao Bao's; it was purely disgusting.

If it's difficult to maintain, add a few sex scenes and it becomes a top-tier erotic novel.

After receiving everyone's criticism, I have reflected on my previous writing mistakes and will strive to avoid repeating them in the future. I will also try my best to remove elements that displeased everyone from future storylines and revise the character designs as much as possible. Please understand.

This is a poorly made pure love story; if you want to see something erotic, just go to Pixiv. Watching this makes me so angry.

Let me share my thoughts on the recent plot developments. As a web novel, the most basic elements of satisfying entertainment in this book, in my opinion, are the transformation of the female lead and the change in her personality; any grand displays of power in public take a backseat. However, I feel the recent plot lacks this satisfying element. The main reason is that the satisfying aspect of the female lead's transformation from resistance to subjugation wasn't well utilized.

From an emotional perspective, it is indeed a 1v1, pure love story with both characters being virgins. However, where is the "bad heroine chasing after her husband" drama that I wanted to see? Because of the male lead's personality, he can't bring himself to hate the female lead at all; it's more like flirting than "training." And the female lead's CS-related actions went unpunished. Even when the truth about the village's destruction was revealed, she was let off lightly, relying on the male lead's forgiveness. The scene I really wanted—Haki Yue regretting her actions and crying her eyes out—was far too brief. 😡