Senior Sister Fairy, I'm Not Your Moonlight Lover

Here are my brief thoughts: First, the characters are empty and vague, like hollow shells. The character portrayals are very rigid and lifeless. Second, the cultivation levels are weak. The setting is fantasy, but it's written like a martial arts story. Take the earlier example of the Nascent Soul cultivator fighting the Void Reset cultivator—the opponent just attacks you head-on without using any skills, and you still get slashed. The entire cultivation level is practically nonexistent. Third, the medical skills are problematic. The divine healer's abilities aren't shown at all. It's as if no one else in the world knows medicine. Also, why use medicine and bandages for every scratch and bruise? These are cultivators; can't they be less lax? It feels more like a fantasy story than a fantasy story...

It feels like the plot hasn't had any satisfying moments in ages. We've waited so long to finally resolve things with the Immortal Alliance, shouldn't we at least give them some sweet moments first?

No eunuchs, no eunuchs I've just been lacking inspiration lately, and I really don't want to keep slacking off. Sending out sick leave slips for several days in a row isn't appropriate either, and I genuinely feel sorry about that. Now that I've rested enough and regained some inspiration, I'll resume updates starting in May. I know I don't deserve to ask for my readers' forgiveness; I can only prove myself through updates and actions!

It's bland and boring; it's not even as good as the content on a similar topic on the other side of the internet.

I'm so sorry, I've been busy these past couple of days and haven't had time to update. I only finished organizing it tonight. Don't worry, I won't let you down with your monthly votes.

The cultivation levels are like a grind game, with rapid, incremental upgrades, but the key issue is that there are no new skills or techniques; it feels like everyone only has one ultimate move. Also, why is everyone focused on the main storyline? I feel like most people are reading this novel for the interactions between the male and female leads, right? Why not develop their relationship more? I just saw the part where the villainous transmigrator appears, and personally, I found it acceptable. Maybe I haven't read many novels, but it felt somewhat novel, yet there's still something strange about it.

I think there's a problem with this book: the protagonist's medical skills are presented in no way different from those of an ordinary doctor. To give a textbook example of a secondary profession system, consider the alchemist in *Battle Through the Heavens*. Unlike ordinary doctors who use mortal fire to concoct a paste, alchemists possess fire catalyzed by battle qi, beast fire, and exotic fire, and they also have intuitive perception. This clearly distinguishes alchemists from non-alchemists. However, the protagonist's medical skills in this book feel like anyone with a prescription can do it; there's nothing special about it. It gives the impression that someone who cultivates immortality is treating illnesses like a mortal. Furthermore, unlike an alchemist who monopolizes elixirs and possesses exotic fire...

The book is good, but it won't stop me from cursing you for being a eunuch.

Adding more female characters won't help, author. You need to develop the story! It's not like we've just started; the fastest-growing character, Sword Master, can't even express his emotions openly and normally. The others are even worse. I don't want to talk about them.

The other female leads (?) Have absolutely no screen time.