Miss Substitute Will Never Become the White Moonlight

To be honest, this isn't the first time I've written a book review for the author. From *Zi Yuan* to *Princess*, the new book *Ms. Substitute* still has the same satisfying flavor. The author's openings are always so refreshingly unique, raising your blood pressure immediately, then constantly feeding you blood pressure medication, leaving you wanting more? In short, *Ms. Substitute* is a bit of a surprise. While the writing is still solid, the plot's logic is like a rollercoaster. First, the whole cast being reborn—I don't think the author even figured out a reasonable arrangement before starting to write. The logical flaws are so numerous I don't even know how to criticize them (you're a repeat offender, so I won't elaborate...).

Unbelievable! What an ultimate, ridiculously overpowered human-machine battle! I couldn't sleep all night reading it, and I still couldn't reach the limits of your creativity! Seriously... If there were even one normal adult in it, it wouldn't be this bad. The timeline in Beijing is even more chaotic! Miss Duan can recognize those three scoundrels who don't use their phones at all, huh?! My goodness, this female lead, who loves her sister so much and is so capable, is like a human-machine, acting without any regard for the consequences, constantly talking about how wonderful it is... But her actions are like a thesis defense by a friend. In these chapters, I haven't seen any family affection. The older sister, Kuang Kuang, is busy with her career, and the sister-sister relationship is worse than when they were collecting scraps! As for abilities, aside from...

I haven't found any connection between this and the book title since it was released. The term "meal replacement" always seems forced and inexplicable. Two adults revert to children's bodies, one or two still retaining their memories. They report themselves missing to the police and claim their parents are famous people in Beijing. Whether true or not, they would surely be traced and contacted, right? The protagonist doesn't know this, but surely the female lead does?

The plot is currently being updated purely for padding. From the moment she returned to the Wen family until now, author, don't you even look at what you've written? Wasn't Lao Yun supposed to go abroad to investigate? What happened? What was the result? The result was that she went to visit a friend. Author, you'd be better off slowing down the updates and figuring out how to write the rest of the plot.

Let me state my conclusion first: I don't recommend this book for normal people. To serve the plot (there should be a plot? Although most reviews say there isn't, I think there is), this book completely demotes the intelligence of all characters, easily causing blood pressure spikes and triggering aversion to stupidity. While I can understand this—after all, anyone with even a tiny bit of intelligence above idiocy who is reborn a decade or two ago could achieve more than Bill Gates—this book involves multiple rebirths, and without making everyone's intelligence a tiny fraction of what's considered idiocy, the book couldn't continue. Another issue is the incredibly slow pacing; I could practically "store" my brain elsewhere without using it...

The writing is utterly disastrous. The illogical structure, the flawed creative process, and most importantly, the fundamental flaws in its very structure—it should never have been written at all. Novels often revolve around the conflict between the protagonist and their environment. This environment could be their living conditions, their progress, or the influencing factors could be people, crises, or accidents. The disastrous nature of this book lies firstly in the protagonist's complete lack of struggle against their environment, which severely damages the reader's experience. Some people enjoy reading about seemingly useless characters, but no one enjoys seeing a protagonist who remains perpetually passive. Complete passivity only piques the reader's interest while...

Just like those old-school domineering CEOs, this is enough to lower your blood pressure; some people write it like it's brilliant.

🍍There are so many people writing these kinds of purely abusive stories. It feels like they're not even as good as short videos🍅. Is this some kind of revenge against society?

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Why did you suddenly change the cover? I almost didn't recognize you.