[Multiple Heroines] [All Heroines Are Virgins, All Are Won] [Romance] [Lighthearted Another-World Reincarnation] [Feel-Good Power Fantasy Light Novel]
So what if I’m a live-in son-in-law?
I get to eat her family’s rice, and a soft life is all the sweeter when it doesn’t cost me a thing.
So what if she’s a dragon princess?
The dragon princess still needs me in her bed before she can fall asleep.
After transmigrating into another world as a noble, Lanche only wants to read books, bask in the sun, stroll around town, and enjoy a leisurely, happy life.
So why is the person I married into the family a dragon princess?!
And even worse, why are the kingdom’s princess, the empire’s princess, the demon princess, the elf princess, and even the divine realm’s princess all interrupting my laid-back life?!
“Don’t you want to have children with me?” the dragon princess asked.
“Don’t you want to play my drum?” the kingdom’s princess asked.
“I come with a dowry,” said the imperial princess.
“You think you can slack off just because you’ve got your pants on?” the demon princess glared fiercely.
“Do as I say, and I’ll give you a reward~” the divine princess kept tempting him.
Damn these seductresses, they’re ruining my resolve!
It started strong, but after chapter ten it started to fall into the old clichés: forced "pretending to be weak to deceive others," and the problem was that it was all just playing the fool without a main plot. Other characters pretend to be weak to hold back a big surprise, but this guy was just lying low and working like a slave behind the scenes. Also, the mockery could at least be a little more elegant; that idiot Yu was completely brainless, openly criticizing people in front of her business partners. How could she have such a position? Did she never take a class on aristocratic etiquette? There are quite a few things to criticize. I thought the first ten chapters were pretty good, the initial setup was quite good.
The thirteen images reveal a masked style, indicating what kind of frustrating and angsty story it is.
To advance the plot, he forced himself to go to the tavern and act all high and mighty, and even had his thesis defense fed to me.
I started reading because of the opening premise, and I have to say the combination of the dragon girl, silver-haired girl, and young male lead really appealed to me. While the plot has its flaws, it's generally acceptable. However, the writing style is rather simplistic; I guess they need more practice and reference more works. As for the characters, the antagonists either seem brainless or just plain grumpy, which is quite frustrating, and they haven't even faced any real consequences yet. Is the main cast trying to emulate The Shield Hero?
After reading over 20 chapters, I felt completely idiotic. The protagonist was like a sycophant who could be summoned and dismissed at will, using the slogan of giving up while doing the work of a sycophant.
Starting today, I'm challenging myself to work four hours a day; let's see if I have the ability.
Well, how should I put it? The romance you wrote was... Well, it didn't really make much sense, at least not the romance scenes. It was written at a pretentious, artsy level, and it read like a simplistic, amateurish novel. If you ask me, I'd say you should write a couple more books to practice, and then write something you really like. Start with a couple of mainstream books to practice, then write one you truly enjoy. I hope your writing style will improve in the future.
You're forcing the protagonist to suffer setbacks just to create a dramatic plot point; no wonder your subscriptions are dropping. It's quite frustrating.
Are the main characters likable? Some main characters just infuriate me; they're like complete idiots.
I didn't see any lighthearted, fun, and boastful isekai (another world) novels. But I did see a novel full of useless characters. Uh, pretty weird!