Hypnosis? There's No Way I'd Fall for Hypnosis

Don't rush to order this author's books. This bastard rarely finishes any of them; he just writes half and then runs away.

It's hard to imagine that harem novels these days still have female characters who die. I thought I'd traveled back in time. There are many ways to write a final boss, but why use this kind to disgust people? I used to think Y-bar was a bit obsessed, but now it seems it's definitely not enough.

It's hard to imagine that harem novels these days still have female characters dying. I thought I'd traveled back in time! There are many ways to write a final boss, but this is just to disgust the reader. Some people think it's normal for a character to die—how many novels don't have deaths? But in a harem novel, a young, naive girl who harbors feelings for the male protagonist, whom he uses to manipulate her and develop a subtle romantic relationship with, is killed off? That's definitely poisonous. I believe most readers who enjoy harem novels think so too. I don't know what kind of mental state the author was in when writing this...

Dong died, and nobody cared. The protagonist showed no emotion whatsoever, as if Dong had died on the roadside. (The last sentence appears to be a fragment and doesn't translate directly.)

Seeing the mermaid fall to the ground with a single claw, he realized how much of the hype surrounding the Lord of the Ocean's true combat power was exaggerated.

Newcomers beware! The first volume starts with the death of a woman.

The pacing of the latest chapters seems off, doesn't it? Both female leads are in trouble, yet the male lead is still flirting next door...? And, the male lead claims he was hypnotized by the female leads, but their injuries are a fact, right? What about the male lead's emotional fluctuations? He doesn't seem like a male lead; he's more like a fawned spectator? The Saintess arc is really strange.

To borrow a line from a book review I saw elsewhere, "I mind, but I'm not bothered." I think how the author writes is their business—how they arrange the characters, how they design the plot—it should all be their own affair. If they share similar values and are kindred spirits, and we happen to meet, that's interesting and serendipitous. If we're the opposite, I'll still find it enjoyable to see a completely different perspective, satisfying my curiosity. If we're the opposite and I can't accept it, I'll likely comment, expressing my dissatisfaction and venting my emotions. These are all normal things. But I...

This book feels really strange; sometimes it's quite awkward to read, and honestly, it's a pretty bad piece of writing. But it's just so enjoyable to read. 🧠 I'll leave it here for now 😋

Seriously, I can't imagine what kind of person could write a novel while simultaneously incorporating their own pretentious, artsy tendencies. Am I trying to select a specific readership? If so, then I'd like to ask if you enjoy melancholic scenes, and whether the ending is also a mess (my personal opinion). Just tell me directly, and I won't read it. I'll wait and see until you answer. Don't try to sell your pretentious, artsy side to this kind of book.