The Deep-Sea Girl Begs Me to Take Her In
深海少女乞求我的饲养
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 360k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
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This is just one of my thoughts; I hope it's helpful.
The male protagonist's emotional journey is too awkward; his actions and thoughts are inconsistent, creating a strong sense of disconnect. Throughout the story, he only talks about the monster girls being hurt, with little emotional fluctuation, giving off a hypocritical vibe. You could add more inner monologues, such as the protagonist resolving to protect them, but knowing he can't change the lab environment alone, and feeling guilty and heartbroken for the monster girls. You need to elevate the monster girls' status in the protagonist's heart; this would make the story more compelling. The protagonist treats them like family. If you're trying to say he actually sees them as pets, then...
Why is there such a disgusting character as Zhao Ning? The plot made me feel like this sea deer was being NTR'd.
The male and female leads are subjected to too much torture. The author is a bit childish and pretentious, needing this kind of writing to portray heavy emotions. But honestly, it's so suffocating. They've been tormented so much; it's like forcing one of two people who are so in love they'd die if they didn't see each other to watch the other beheaded. It's not just torture; it's perversion and humiliation, enough to make anyone abandon this sweet part. It's disgusting.
Some suggestions for the author
As the title suggests: 1. I suggest adding the SCP tag to this book. The various experimental subjects in the text do fit the SCP setting, and this could also attract more readers. 2. Personally, I think the main plot doesn't need to progress too quickly. I suggest adding more slice-of-life scenes. A fast-paced main plot might cause a loss of control and introduce some plot holes. 3. The protagonist is a zookeeper, not a researcher or a doctor, so the author can avoid overly hardcore settings. Just explain the basic settings; these can be left for later...
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It has a kind of beauty that disregards the reader's well-being.
It's frustrating to watch, and the warnings are vague, but the worldview is what attracts me.
The subject matter is good, but I don't want it to become popular, otherwise the moderators will have cuckoldry stories. Personally, I feel the protagonist is too weak. It's fortunate that there are many women in the story, otherwise it would be criticized to the skies.
Why am I being mentally compared to a Minotaur? Have you lost your mind?
The author is a bit naive and idealistic; this book is like forcing two people who are so in love they'd die if they didn't see each other to watch the other get beheaded. And the author is the judge who decides everything. So what's appealing is that they like each other, but what's unappealing is that the author puts together a rather perverse and gruesome spectacle of slaughter, insulting their feelings.