Bai Yu transmigrates into the world of an erotic game, becoming the classic male protagonist with an innate succubus constitution.
To avoid becoming the heroine’s plaything, Bai Yu wants nothing to do with them. But things don’t go as planned, and despite all his careful calculations, he never expected them to come looking for him.
The teacher, who always keeps her word, actually says something as suggestive as "I want you," and even wants to use hypnosis to make him fall for her.
The beautiful class monitor looks serious and completely uninterested in him, but little by little, she begins to want to collect someone. Unfortunately, he’s the one she has in mind.
A wealthy, beautiful upperclassman who seems easygoing invites him to join her club, but it turns out she’s really after his body.
Faced with heroines who possess absurdly powerful abilities, the only person Bai Yu can count on is himself.
Some people are really going too far. They start stirring up trouble just by looking at the book title and synopsis. Is it that the theme of a female protagonist who stops time can't be written?
I want to see someone successfully hypnotized, making their teacher their lifelong love, and then being forced by another woman...
Damn it, another one of those unfinished projects, huh? If you don't want to write, then don't write! Don't just abandon it halfway through, you piece of shit!
I read your previous tentacle novel before; the writing was okay, but it wasn't erotic. Even with tentacles, the action wasn't very engaging; it just rushed through the plot. I hope this one is better.
Bro, you didn't have enough exciting moments. Although the writing is smooth and not too simplistic, and the logic is passable, it's too mundane and there aren't many erotic scenes. I felt the most satisfying part was when the male lead fought two opponents—no dragging things out, just straight to the point.
The progress is too slow; some daily routines really don't need to be written down.
Pretty impressive, well-written, the opening is of high quality. It surprised me quite a bit. It's just a little short on words; keep it up and you'll succeed.
Reading chapter 54, female lead: xxxxx Male lead: Okay, okay, okay, okay, okay.
Well, this book might have a drawback. Because it focuses on everyday life, readers might complain about the slow pacing and feel it's deliberately dragging things out. It depends on how the author handles it. Personally, I really enjoy this type of story; it's rare to see something like this on a list dominated by yuri/marriage-turned-girlfriend stories. 😚
The current pace is good; there's no need to change any style. Writing about daily life is quite interesting.