[Gender-bender yuri, one-on-one true love, the protagonist can be either a cool big sister or a cute little girl, and the heroine's descent into darkness is chronicled.]
After transmigrating as the spirit of a secret realm, she saves an immortal maiden who was about to become a puppet. The price is that an irreversible master-servant mark is branded on her.
"Lingling, once you've taken human form, let's become Dao companions. I'll take responsibility for you, all right?"
A great spirit born between Heaven and Earth could never be content to live beneath someone else forever! This immortal spirit wants freedom and to see the world outside!
She doesn't want someone else to keep her and take responsibility for her!
At the ruined sect, Shen Lingling completes her mission, then irresponsibly abandons the penniless immortal maiden.
The immortal maiden escapes the bad-ending CG, but loses everything she once had in the process.
She searches for Shen Lingling, but the other girl has already fled.
And so, the immortal maiden falls to darkness.
Many years later, Shen Lingling wears a wedding dress she can't take off. As the immortal maiden lifts her red veil, tears of regret stream from Shen Lingling's eyes.
"So you were hiding your identity and staying by my side all along, just waiting for this moment?"
"Hehe, that's right..."
You think you can sway me into writing a book with just a few words? Impossible. Like I said before, if you like it, stay; cats are welcome. If you don't like it, I won't force you; you can leave at your own discretion.
I understand you don't want to use PUA tactics. But you should at least have some normal human thinking, right? Unconditional trust is fine, but to still unconditionally trust someone even after betrayal and a savior reminds you... I've seen female protagonists like that before Tang San... You yourself know this is Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. And you still insist on writing it... I didn't use a single swear word. If you delete this comment, I'm leaving immediately.
I found it hard to continue reading. The problem is the lack of detailed psychological descriptions before the characters take action, making things seem inexplicable. It also constantly torments the protagonist, and the protagonist's attitude during these acts is nonchalant and inexplicable. Generally, tormenting the protagonist is for future growth.
The protagonist, like the AI, is utterly useless.
Sigh, I've figured out how to change it 🤓. If we're going to go for a dark turn, let's go all the way and deepen the misunderstanding. I'm taking a day off today to revise it, and I'll come back tomorrow to show you all my revisions.
We're just strangers who met by chance, there's no need to use such harsh language. I didn't insult you, it's really not appropriate for me to do that.
The early chapters I wrote were so frustrating, just like female-oriented novels, but now I've gotten a better feel for it.
Quack! Cat Sister loves to chew her teeth.
Dear readers, please be kind to the female lead. A female lead who grew up under various forms of manipulation is bound to have a difficult personality from the start. Lack of love and timidity are common traits. If you must criticize, criticize the author; it's the author who created this kind of environment for the female lead.
Like female-oriented novels on shorter videos, they're incredibly frustrating. They might be entertaining, but it's not worth making yourself suffer for them. I don't recommend watching them.