The Chaste Little Junior Sister

The middle section is disorganized and chaotic; I couldn't even understand the distinction between the soul and the original body, so I gave up. The writing jumps around too much; just when you figure out what's happening, it cuts to the next scene. It's unreadable because it's so messy. The book itself is good, but the plot jumps around so much that it's impossible to read, and there's no clear distinction between the original body and the clones. The entire text consists only of the protagonist's name and a few ridiculously short, nonsensical paragraphs; it's just filler to reach the word count. I can only hope for a better reading experience later on when the souls have merged.

A scheming woman in a game manipulates all, the second sister's pure heart crumbles. The eldest sister falls into demonic possession, her love unresolved, her heart still unsettled despite having mastered all the strategies. Tears well up at the sight of her master's mark, while Meng Li smiles broadly before the screen. A sudden awakening from a dream of transmigration and rebirth weighs heavily on her mind as she ponders the past. Su Li, you have committed many unjust acts, and you will ultimately perish. Observe all things in heaven and earth; everything has its own way. If you act against the heavens, you will surely be punished. Once there was a vixen, who used sweet words and seductive charm to bewitch people's minds, but was eventually captured by hunters, her fur stripped off, her soul returned to the underworld. There was also a venomous snake, insidious and vicious, lurking in the shadows, waiting for its chance to strike, but was ultimately caught by a falcon, her head severed, her blood staining the wilderness. These are all unjust people who ultimately suffer retribution; you should take this as a warning. Observe the scenery of the four seasons, spring flowers and autumn moon...

It was quite good at first, until the appearance of the avatar... I don't know how to describe it. First, the second senior sister and the id... Although the id is part of the original body, it feels like someone who has liked you for a long time suddenly becomes interested in someone else who looks exactly like you, forces themselves on them, and then is only interested in that person, remaining indifferent to you. Then, every time it gets to the point of "driving" (a euphemism for sexual intercourse), it's always just a little bit away, but in the end, the avatar takes over. It feels like you're about to have your moment but are stuck at that critical point. If the avatar setting were removed, I wouldn't say this. In summary, the avatar...

Hello author, I've copied your book and published it on other platforms. The feedback from readers has been great, and the earnings are good, with many payments! I'm planning to buy a new car in the next few months, so I hope you'll update more chapters so as not to affect my earnings. Please understand this, or you know what I'm capable of!

When will the main storyline return to focusing on Master and Senior Sister? It feels like the main story has gone off track. Seriously, is there even a main storyline? With so many characters, it's getting increasingly chaotic. Of course, it's also possible I'm just not interested in monsters or sword spirits.

Although I'd considered it finished a long time ago, I'm still a little sad that it's actually over. Huang Gu-san, promise me you'll write erotic novels for the rest of your life, okay? Otherwise, who's going to make up for what I missed?

After chapter 400, I had no idea what the author was writing.

This is a romance/harem novel disguised as a cultivation fantasy story, full of typos and a chaotic world-building narrative. It's best read without thinking!

I just subscribed to the whole thing, and the reviews say it's easy to get disconnected. Is that true?

Seeing Hao Kan's performance made me feel positive and motivated; I lay on the bed, spiraling and rolling around, as if I were ascending to heaven. Earth Snake Spirit