Uh-Oh, My Superpower Is Actually...!

Having read many novels about marriage transformation, I think the author's plot control and world-building in this one are quite good, at least readable. However, to be honest, I don't understand why it had to be a marriage transformation story; it actually dragged down the plot. The main reason, I think, is that the author's character development for the male lead is really poor, inversely proportional to the development of the plot and world-building. Firstly, the male lead has virtually no screen time in the first 200 chapters, almost like a background character, which makes it difficult to establish his character. This suggests the author is writing this for the first time. Even the female lead's early character development wasn't particularly likable, but you can see the author's improvement through plot progression...

It's rare to find a novel that doesn't feature a cute protagonist (I don't dislike cute characters, but after reading so many, this one is refreshing). The protagonist's slightly sarcastic personality is playful (which I personally really like). The story strongly evokes the school setting, with many memorable details that bring back memories of my own school days... (Oops! My dead memories are attacking me again!). The atmosphere of the initial encounter is great, with a touch of horror that I really enjoyed. (Not the plot, just the description). The battle descriptions are my type. (Only the most impactful scenes are considered battles...) The protagonist's companions are not stereotypical; their personalities are very realistic. Overall...

After finishing the college entrance exam and returning to my old favorite novel, I discovered that 90% of my reading had been abandoned, only Xiuxiu is still keeping me company qwq I've had a great time reading this, and I'm very satisfied. Chrysanthemum, please keep writing!

A novel about a woman being forced into a marriage reversal has reached 1 million words and the male and female leads haven't made any real progress. I don't think it can be considered a true reversal novel anymore, because at this point, I feel like removing the male lead wouldn't make much difference. To be honest, when you asked me to keep reading, I really wanted to, but every time I read it, the male lead barely appeared. I could only tell myself to wait a while and then read it again when I was in a different mood. I don't dare bet on how many more tens of thousands of words it will take for the romance to develop. There are too many BL novels that are discontinued or have terrible endings; many books over a million words also have anticlimactic endings. Also, as the protagonist...

For private issues like gender reassignment, shouldn't a well-established institution or school prioritize stability and, ideally, provide one-on-one guidance? Even in today's society, most people with mental health issues try to keep it private. While it sounds harsh, mental health issues are a form of "mental illness," and no one wants to be labeled that. If someone wants to confide in someone, the target shouldn't be a blood relative like their parents, but rather a very close friend or teacher, or the doctor directly involved in their condition—not a complete stranger. And...

Don't throw away those old books! Your plans are terrible; they're not going to cause any problems. Don't let them become unfinished.

I think everyone should just stop subscribing and just read pirated copies. This book is already poorly written; they said it was almost finished last year, but it hasn't been updated much in months. This author isn't worth subscribing to.

Oh, I misspoke. It's not that the protagonist doesn't have a major role, but the protagonist's position and function in the plot are that of someone who is very frustrated and has to rely on others and props for everything. Even if they level up quickly enough, like having three fully equipped items, they try to play in high-level matches, only to find everyone else is already fully geared and relentlessly chasing down the protagonist and their allies.

For all readers of this novel who want to see the main characters and the male lead getting along well, and who have nothing to do with the long, fragmented plot lacking significant main character development and filled with chaotic battles between powerful figures who are constantly trying to kill the protagonist, you can choose to skip around chapter 560, skipping a full hundred chapters (and more, because this part of the story hasn't ended yet) and then wait for the author to update.

The first 300,000 words were excellent, so I subscribed to the entire book immediately. However, the author's weakness in condensing the military training section became apparent. The plot dragged on and became tedious. It's clear the author wanted to depict the protagonist's willpower development, but this felt like child's play—uninteresting. It would have been better to start with military training and then move on to real combat in the virtual world. I hope the author can improve this. I had high hopes for this book; it's one of the few truly refreshing novels I've read recently. But if it continues at this pace and aims for a proper ending, it will probably take at least 5 million words.