Ren Bin had diligently completed the script. What he never expected was that six years later, the heroine would come back to find him again.
And she'd brought a little girl he'd never met before?
"He's not your big brother. He's your daddy."
After learning he had a daughter, he suddenly realized... the people around him seemed to be acting strangely, too.
Why had his usually taciturn eldest disciple, who devoted herself to cultivation, become so unsettled that she nearly fell into demonic cultivation?
Why had the sect master, who usually spoke to him coldly, suddenly begun fussing over him like a lovesick puppy?
Why had the protagonist of the script, once his rival in love, stopped looking for the heroine and insisted on embarking on the path to immortality with him instead?
Before he knew it, Ren Bin was horrified to discover:
He was supposed to be the villain, so why had he ended up in this bizarre love triangle?!!!
(Raising a daughter, multiple heroines, all routes completed.)
In just 12 chapters, the protagonist travels on horseback. Does that mean flying is only possible by flying on a sword? And shouldn't flying on a sword even without any sword intent be possible? This is so strange.
Currently at chapter 88, here are my initial thoughts: it's well-written, but there are still issues. The "chasing after the husband" tag is nowhere to be seen, and the handling of betrayals is clearly poor. Pineapple Bun has another book about leaving the team, and I think that book's handling of betrayal was perfect. But this book weakens the conflict and completely ignores it. The only person the male lead has dealt with firmly since leaving the mountain is Lian Hua.
One chapter was blocked, sob sob, where was it blocked? Is the reviewer Chu Nan?
I'm giving this 500 Fire Scrolls as a token of my support. I really hope the author doesn't abandon this project; it's given me a real psychological trauma.
Is this pure love? [Sfem:12:534] The main heroine is so perfect that writing it as a harem would feel like an insult to her.
The only book I had any lingering thoughts about was "Pineapple Bun," but after finishing it, I moved on to other reading apps. Now, most of the top-ranked books are about "transformation" or similar stories.
If you're tired of other novels, check out these slice-of-life stories. They're basically filler in every sense of the word, but still enjoyable.
I feel it doesn't quite stay on topic, there are many characters but none are well-developed, and the main characters aren't sufficiently portrayed. Or to put it another way, in just 390,000 words, some authors spend several chapters writing something that feels like a passerby.
It's been a while since I've watched it. How's the couple's relationship now?
I've subscribed to the whole thing. After reading it, there were generally no problems, and it's worth continuing to subscribe. However, the author might need to change the male lead's attitude towards the female lead. I was worried about something drastic happening in the second chapter, but later we learn that the male lead pursued the female lead for ten years, which is contradictory. Also, the male lead knew that Yu Xian was the female lead in the script. Rereading the earlier parts today, it all seemed very strange.