[Sickly, Immortal, No Modern Tech Tree, No System, Trash Protagonist, Gets Beaten (crossed out)]
I was an actor who became a sickly Imperial Preceptor. I saved the Empress's nation from the brink of collapse and death, only to pass away on the eve of victory, teaching her what it means to be too brilliant for this world and to die young from being too clever.
I saved the last surviving daughter of a fallen noble house on the night of its destruction, then pretended to be the culprit who wiped out her family. I watched her grow up overnight, watched her gradually become the strongest, and watched her kill me. When she finally avenged herself and restored her family's glory, the tears she shed upon learning the truth might not have been tears of joy.
I fell into demonic cultivation and met a sword immortal. I watched her transform from icy and aloof to falling in love with me, until she ran her long sword through my heart. I dragged her down from her lofty perch, where she stood untouched by the mundane world, with hands stained in blood, then savored the look of love and hatred, obsession and madness on her face.
“This is so much fun, so much fun, I'm having way too much fun. Wait, I'll go open a door and then come back to sa...
I'm having writer's block, so I need to take a day off. Please feel free to offer any suggestions, even criticism is welcome. Watching the data drop bit by bit is exhausting. I'm just sitting in front of the computer, clicking web pages and clicking the mouse in a daze.
Are there any readers from Gansu? I'm a little worried.
Happy New Year!
[Throughout this journey, we meet strangers, yet it feels as if we've known each other before.] With the Dongyu chapter finished, those who have been waiting for this book to finish can now cash out.
I'd love to read this and get some recommendations. I'll try my best to update more.
My thoughts on my first time on Twitter
I'm about to post this on Twitter, so this is also a way to let new readers know what I'm trying to say about this book. First, the protagonist won't suffer setbacks; he won't be invincible one chapter and then suddenly face an enemy the next. There will be battles, but they won't be just filler. To make the battles more interesting, I'll incorporate some common and uncommon folk traditions, such as the protagonist's Nuo opera and Cui's talismans, but those aren't the focus. Second, for those who can't handle violence, I'm sorry I can't satisfy most readers' demands, and I understand this book might flop. I'm also prepared for the first few hundred thousand words to be unnoticed. Finally, I also want to write about a different kind of immortality, what the state of mind should be like after achieving immortality...
Condition restored, third update!
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The present and future of actors
Currently: What impressed me most was undoubtedly the combat. The protagonist's fighting style, as the author stated, is indeed uncommon, but it's also quite novel and visually appealing, possessing a high degree of distinctiveness, which is commendable. The current pacing of the plot is decent, although some parts are not smooth enough and feel abrupt (the subject is unclear), and there are a few typos (the "he" and "she" parts don't match). Otherwise, there are no major issues. Future: I want to focus on the future of the work. The subject matter is average, but if the main storyline in the synopsis, along with the "depressing" tag and the currently subtly hidden "yandere" element...
I've subscribed to the whole thing, let's get moving, author!