Day 9
After ordering your last lunch,
your money ran out.
And so you starved to death.
Yuan Ye is interested in cultural studies.
Every so often,
he asks his childhood friend, who's into anime, to recommend some fun galgames,
to help him find a direction for his serious research.
But one day,
after downloading his friend's recommendation, "Survive 120 Days in a World of Romance,"
he'd barely started playing
when Yuan Ye discovered he'd transmigrated into the body of a handsome young man in the world of romance, who was also named Yuan Ye.
Unlike most protagonists,
Yuan Ye has principles and has no desire to become a girl-conquering machine.
What's more...
The first piece of information he found was this:
If he survived 120 days
without triggering any key events with the heroines,
he could return to the real world?
With no idea who the heroines were,
and longing for the girl he loved back in reality,
Yuan Ye began his quest to survive in the world of romance.
But as time passed,
he slowly realized things weren't as simple as he'd thought.
A group of dangerously unstable girls gradually gathered around him.
Before it was a romance game,
this was a survival game.
"Yuan Ye, you can't run away from us anymore."
The girls smiled like flowers,
and these yandere sweethearts began to take over Yuan Ye's everyday life like ghosts.
I'm speechless. They keep cutting out so few words, and the plot is so convoluted that even ten chapters might not be enough to explain a single point. They say you shouldn't "build up" a book by subscribing, but I've subscribed chapter by chapter and it's like I haven't read anything at all—a complete waste of money. It truly started strong but has since declined significantly.
Sigh, to be honest, I really dislike the game's premise. It gives me the feeling that the male protagonist doesn't win the women's hearts through his abilities or looks, but rather through the game itself. This implies that any random person could be the same, and those women would fall for him, which makes it all seem meaningless.
This book is totally my cup of tea! Author, please update soon! Pineapple Bun is currently all about whitening and yuri (lesbian romance), try to change these unhealthy trends! I want yandere! I want yandere! I want yandere!
Book review
Having only read the first nine chapters, this can hardly be called an interesting book. In my opinion, the author didn't intend to create any distinct, flesh-and-blood characters; everything feels like looking at a blurry figure through frosted glass. Based on the first nine chapters, both female leads are mindlessly throwing themselves at each other. If Zi Xin was once saved, then her throwing herself at him is somewhat understandable, but what about Su Qianjin? Is she just a love-struck fool? Despite being a junior they've only just met, the protagonist addresses her by her first name affectionately, which makes him seem like a frivolous man. Frivolity is probably the protagonist's most prominent characteristic; besides that, I...
The writing is a bit messy, with many paragraph and punctuation errors. The male lead's emotional intelligence fluctuates wildly, making it a bit painful to read. I hope it gets revised.
Well, I've read the latest chapter, and overall the story is alright. However, there are a lot of typos, omissions, and even formatting issues throughout the book. Sometimes I can't even tell if the author is writing a novel or poetry.
Author, you don't want me to keep writing this, right? Give me ten updates a day!
Has it been written about the return?
I think the scene with the "eating the magic pill" should have been earlier where Su Qianjin reached a bad ending, and then the male lead could have simply reset the progress bar and started over. This would have shown the male lead's awareness and made him realize that the current world is not a game but reality.
Which female character does the author think readers prefer?