Heroine, Have Some Restraint. Why Are You Chasing Me, the Villainous Heir?

I feel that people who want to survive in the martial arts world should all be a little shrewd; too many brainless, spoiled villains would just make the game less interesting.

If this is the final volume, I feel it will most likely have a disappointing ending (or perhaps a weak ending?). Despite being a harem story, the proportion of screen time given to the various heroines is severely imbalanced. It's clear the author heavily favors the female knight-errant and the holy maiden master, but personally, I feel the female knight-errant and the holy maiden are the least compelling of the heroines. One spends 90% of the plot arguing, and the other 90% of the plot is flirting and fan service. Their characters are very stereotypical and flat.

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1. The author's warnings are weak. The premise is a cuckolded erotica, and the female lead does fit the character description. The erotica implies she's been seen naked, right? Then, the male lead is constantly protected by guards, and he's seen touching her private parts, etc. I knew the mask would be a major red flag (I was already upset before seeing the male lead's face). To be honest, the author's writing is decent, otherwise I wouldn't have read this far, but there are still many problems. However, the author's attitude is good, so I can convince myself to imagine a positive outcome. 2. The female lead is too casual, falling in love so easily? They haven't even done anything. But it's not a harem novel, leading to a strong sense of disconnect. 3. The male lead's character...

Well, how to put it... Although it's a copy of *The Snow Sword*, you can't imitate it this well without some writing skill. The female leads are well-developed, and their personalities are quite distinct. But couldn't you add something original? This protagonist is way too much like Xu Fengnian... Whether it's his self-reference, the people he encounters (I think Ji Qingyan is a direct comparison to Nangong Pushe, his aunt is like Pei Nanwei, Ji Yang is completely like Xu Xiao, the Duke of Chu is like Gu Jiantang, and the background is Li Yang, I won't go into details), or that phrase "Waiter, bring the wine!" And the speed of his cultivation breakthroughs (Xu Fengnian went straight from zero to Vajra, and then just hovered around Vajra)...

The pacing is getting slower and slower. Chapters 521 to 526 could have been covered in just two chapters, but it's been stretched to five. I suggest reducing the amount of pointless flirting, especially with the female warrior; the content is too repetitive.

Can the author post the chapters that were censored via WeChat or other means? QQ groups are not available overseas.

I came across this novel on a homepage recommendation page. The synopsis seemed interesting (quite gentlemanly), so I read a few dozen chapters and was immediately captivated by the plot. Personally, I believe the best way to judge a novel's quality is by how it feels to the reader, and this one was exceptionally enjoyable for me. The author's writing style is clearly excellent, and as a harem novel, the author has paid close attention to the female lead's character development, frequently asking for reader feedback. In short, if you're interested in harem novels, this is definitely worth reading. Finally, I hope the author continues to write excellent novels.

Ah ha, can't sleep in the middle of the night, looking for something to do. I started following this book when it first started updating, and in my eyes it's already a rare gem. The author's writing is top-notch, and I love the female characters' personalities (I'm a huge fan of the female lead! I'm begging for her return!). The camaraderie between the male and female leads is also great, but what I consider normal content is always getting censored. The plot is currently leaning towards political intrigue, but it's progressing a bit slowly. The male lead is constantly rushing between different female leads; I hope the plot catches up. Personally, I prefer to finish the main story in one go, then add some slice-of-life scenes to transition before moving on to the next major volume. I don't tend to let books build up quickly...

I can't stand it anymore. The female characters are all too abstract, especially the one surnamed Chu. She wanted to humiliate the male lead with a poem, but ended up being humiliated by him instead and then crying. And then the male lead goes crazy trying to lick her boots. The aunt is the same; on one hand, she makes the male lead write all sorts of scandalous stories about himself, and on the other hand, she's jealous of sleeping with the courtesan. Is she having internal conflicts? Then go for the arrogant and domineering path instead of the romantic one. This isn't jealousy, it's being pretentious. There are already excellent works to copy, can't you even copy them properly? The main plot is still about love.