Noah, humanity's strongest knight, became a weak apprentice witch after failing to defeat the Witch of Winter.
Will she give in to the witch's insults and orders?
She doesn't want to, but her body can't disobey the witch's commands...
With no other choice, she has to obey the witch while searching for a way to return her body to normal.
One day, Noah had an unexpected encounter with her old friends.
Seeing the once-mighty knight now transformed into a petite, helpless witch, they could no longer suppress the thoughts in their hearts...
Elf Princess: Let me protect you, Lord Noah...
Red Dragon Queen: You have to become my wife!
Human Saintess: Have you forgotten our engagement?
Witch of Winter: I want you to stay by my side forever.
Noah: Get a grip, you guys! Don't be like this!
The readership is really low. The author is purely working out of love and doesn't have the money to support her. The current crackdown on yuri is too severe, causing a significant loss of big-name readers.
Am I getting old? The pacing feels too fast. The protagonist's personality softens too quickly, many parts aren't described with enough subtlety, and the romance progresses too rapidly. More flashbacks could be added to build up the story.
If you had revived sooner, all my monthly votes would be yours.
Author, is this story primarily about a dominant or submissive character? Is it one-on-one or one-on-many?
Noah's personality changed so drastically in an instant, he completely softened up!
Can I put it on the shelves? [Sfem:7:436]
Please don't use a knife.
Good luck, but please don't send it!
Pretty good
Well written