Master, Your Disciple Is Coming!

Isn't this a bit of overshadowing the main character? Why is it all about the female supporting character?

I was genuinely pleasantly surprised to see your name. As a long-time reader of this author, having followed your work since the early 2000s, I'm quite impressed. However, judging from your writing, it seems you're deliberately trying to change your style to resemble Pineapple Bun's. Frankly, I don't think the typical style of Gen Z authors suits you. Instead of creating something that's neither one thing nor the other, perhaps you should stick to your original style.

For me personally, whether it's pure romance or harem, it doesn't matter; as long as it's well-written, I'll enjoy reading it. I've even read stories about reverse harems. But the beginning of your book clearly has that harem vibe—all that surrounding women, past life entanglements, and so much plot and description for every female supporting character. To insist these characters are all supporting roles is just irritating. I think if you're going to do pure romance, just do it properly. Don't add all that ambiguous stuff. If you want to grab attention with those ambiguous plots, then just make it a proper harem. What's the difference between this kind of wishful thinking and a stock market manipulation novel?

I want to see an "what if" scenario where my master becomes a girl! You lousy author, hurry up and write it for me!

Why are they playing the falling out game again? This kind of thing gets boring after a while.

When will we start stir-frying Master? 🤤

The new plot is hard to judge.

This is truly hopeless; the plot has been completely shattered.

The male lead is too villainous; he's cowardly, suspicious, and ruthless—he's nothing like a male lead.

Deleting my comment, huh? You dare to write it but not admit it, huh?