Jiang Miao was an orphan both before and after transmigrating, and it took him a long time to find a master he could truly trust.
Sadly, after eighteen years together, he discovered he had been nothing but a pawn.
He was sent to the demonic sect on a mission with almost no chance of survival: assassinate the most extraordinary demoness in history.
As he looked at his coldhearted master on the platform, Jiang Miao finally saw the truth.
After making every preparation, Jiang Miao gave it his all and successfully assassinated the Heavenly Demoness... or rather, her clone.
Jiang Miao thought the mission had failed and his story was about to end, but suddenly something felt off...
Heavenly Demoness: "Wow, handsome. You're the first man to hurt me. That's amazing."
With that, she crippled Jiang Miao with a single palm strike and tossed him a demonic cultivation manual.
"Heehee, handsome, you can't cultivate immortality anymore. Why don't we cultivate the demonic path together?"
Years later, the heavily pregnant Heavenly Demoness clung to Jiang Miao's arm.
Looking at his furious master before them, she smiled and said,
"Thank you, big sister, for giving me a husband. I love him."
PS: This novel has multiple female leads and a heroine who pursues the hero. Most of the heroines aren't normal, and there are no NTR elements.
I really don't understand why they had to go through all this unnecessary trouble. Was the female lead's experience as a top courtesan in a brothel really necessary? Writing it out will only get you criticized, and then they'll have to spend time awkwardly explaining later that the female lead is virgin. Do authors just love doing this kind of shoddy stuff?
The male protagonist is really hard to watch. He's self-righteous, criticizing everyone, but when it comes to himself, he just pretends to be blind and ignores his own problems.
Happy New Year, guys! I'm taking the day off today.
Why don't you stop updating for now and think about how to write first? Look at what you're writing now, have you been possessed?
Master: #That heavy snow ruined my master-disciple relationship# Settle down# See you at the summit
This book already feels like a bad read. Whether it's the initial infiltration and his interactions with the female lead, or later dealing with his master, the male lead always feigns affection. Regardless of whether love can be faked, constantly acting like this makes him seem like a scumbag. His interactions with his master later only show disgust and annoyance, with no change whatsoever. This kind of overly long and padded story becomes increasingly unreadable.
My personal opinions updated in the past few days
To be honest, the beginning of this story is good, but the logic is mediocre, the writing is lacking, and the character development is currently uncertain, somewhat polarizing. The pacing is okay, and I haven't seen any major problems yet. There's no clear main plot, and it might be one of those dungeon-turning-dungeon storylines focused on romance? It's hard to say. The current story lacks anything exciting; it's all tired tropes. Let's see if there's a major shift later. The writing style is very direct; if the current update is your final draft, and you don't correct the typos and grammatical errors, my personal impression is very poor. This is basic professionalism for someone who makes a living with words...
There's no need to read it; it becomes pure angst in the middle. After the master discovers he misunderstood the male lead, he doesn't even offer compensation but relies on his high cultivation level to forcibly control the male lead's mind and force him to forgive him.
Su Ling'er is somewhat disgusting, and the male lead is truly stupid. If the genders were reversed, the fiancée would help the scheming young man disgust her own husband.
The female lead is the top courtesan of the brothel