I Give Up Against the Yandere Heroines, Yet They Can Stop Time

I have nothing else to say, but could the author improve their ability to describe facial expressions? Is the protagonist supposed to be bitter? The most common expression throughout the entire story is a bitter smile. At first, I didn't notice, but later I realized that everything the protagonist does is a bitter smile, a bitter smile, a bitter smile. It really pulls me out of the story! I've been holding back this bitter smile for more than half the book, but now I just can't take it anymore. Sometimes you write a slightly cheesy scene and I get excited, but then the protagonist immediately gives me a bitter smile and I wilted. It's really hard to watch.

I read half of it and regretted subscribing to the whole thing. I couldn't feel any love in this novel; it was all driven by desire. The male lead was also incredibly repressed. Read it and see for yourself.

It's a pity the ending felt too rushed. There could have been more time for the post-marriage story, and the Sakuraba family subplot could have been expanded... Asagiri's story has only just begun. If there are side stories or "what ifs," I'd probably still subscribe.

The beginning was enjoyable, but it deteriorated later, especially the first few chapters of Volume 4, which were nauseating to read.

The author has written another book and is now proving his faith at some point.

A harem-style light novel, no angst, no toxic elements, and the yandere element is very subtle, almost nonexistent? Sweet moments and fan service appear frequently, every few chapters, but it still feels a bit lacking in enjoyment and sweetness; the voice acting and character development are mediocre; worth reading, it's a harem novel, just enjoy the thrill.

What kind of overpowered protagonist is this? A transmigrator keeps rejecting his non-biological sister because of family ties? What kind of family ties does a transmigrator have? Chapter 59 of Volume 4 was truly disgusting. The sister is about to turn evil and the protagonist is still hesitating. Why don't you just stab the protagonist to death? Stop wasting your time!

Foreword—Full spoilers ahead, please leave if you mind. Personally, I think the most brilliant part of the whole book is the scene where Sakuraba Mitsuki stops time to pet the cat. This scene is perfect; it instantly establishes Sakuraba Mitsuki's character of being fiercely proud! The "cause" and "pathology" of her yandere nature are there! The time-stopping superpower, a major highlight of the book, is there! The contrast between the heroine and her personality is endearing! The book's beautiful and vivid writing style is also there! All the thematic connections, the progressively unfolding plot, and the rich character development give the book a sense of design! The profound character development is a major draw for readers, and the progressively unfolding design gives the impression that the author had a clear outline...

The early parts were fine; each character had a distinct personality. However, later on, the character designs became almost identical to those in Qidian's "My Girlfriend is a Ruthless Young Lady." Even the protagonist's self-proclaimed "cherry blossom beauty" (a reference to a handsome young woman from a popular Chinese novel) overlapped with the male lead in Qidian. The male lead was alright in the early parts, but later he felt like Watanabe Toru (the male lead in "My Girlfriend is a Ruthless Young Lady"). His personality and behavior patterns were basically the same as in that book. Even the female leads—the currently featured Time Stop Sister and Kujo (the female lead in "My Girlfriend is a Ruthless Young Lady")—had very similar actions and logic. The scene where they went back to their hometown to visit their parents in the countryside was the same, as were the scenes with the dual personality sister and Kiyoshi...

If this is finished, I'd only give it a 6 out of 10. The 6 is passing only because you kept your word and collected a full harem; everything else is a complete failure. 💧