Sharp-Tongued Villainous Young Master Repairs Arrogant Heroines Online

I know! You can't do this, bro! Such a great subject and plot, you're not going to abandon it again, are you? I've bought three or four of your books, and only one is finished. Are you going to send this one too? Don't let me lose so completely.

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After watching for a while, I found this "Feng Aotian" character to be a bit overpowered. She's somewhat hypocritical, arrogant, selfish, and likes to put on a show of impotent rage 🤡. For some reason, she reminds me a bit of a certain "third brother" (a character from a popular Chinese TV series). I won't accept the later plot where she doesn't confront Mu directly.

It seems none of your works have a complete plot and ending; most of them are either stopped halfway through and then you start a new one or hastily finish the book.

The succubus princess's solo performance wasn't particularly bad, but it wasn't exactly exciting either. Personally, I feel it's unnecessary to write too much; too much writing easily leads to errors.

Looking back, the childhood friend's "heroine" character setting is gone.

Laolong, I miss you.

The progress is too slow. I was hoping to see the main character, C, become a widow, but they've spent ages writing a plot where the protagonist gets slapped in the face.

This childhood friend is really something else. She claims to be a righteous hero, yet she ignores such a heinous criminal and stares at the male lead like a madwoman. She doesn't even listen to her own father, but her so-called heroic male best friend is always right. In a sense, she's just as defiant as Feng Aotian.

As an erotic novel, it's okay, but as a story, it's not so good. The writing is mediocre, the plot is mediocre, and there aren't many satisfying moments. I hope you can improve on that. Don't just focus on writing insults and erotic content; the most important thing in a novel is the development of the plot. You've written a whole chapter about a trivial plot point. Also, it feels like the supporting characters are basically brainless. I hope the author can work on that.