The Darkened Girls Have Chased Me Out of Their Fairy Tales
黑化少女的她们从童话里追出来了
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- Completed
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- 856k Words
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- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
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Sorry everyone, something came up on the morning of the 2nd, so I can only update in the afternoon or evening. I promise there will still be two updates today, no less.
I hope there will be some slice-of-life moments and sweet scenes after each story segment; sometimes a very fast pace can feel tiring and depressing.
Let me share my impressions and questions.
Having read the first volume, this book is worth reading, but it has many problems. First, let's talk about the protagonist. Overall, the protagonist's personality is very clear: brave and responsible—this is the feeling the author wanted to convey. However, the actual feeling it gives is—reckless and incompetent. In a dream, the protagonist and the female lead are attacked, and a witch hunter happens to appear. After the protagonist's barrage of empty talk, she inexplicably starts helping him. Yes, inexplicably, simply because of the protagonist's nonsensical words. In reality, they are attacked by a succubus, and coincidentally, a church appears, then in the wilderness, and coincidentally, a powerful witch hunter appears, and then the succubus...
Guys, I have something to do today, so I need to take the day off.
I've been watching for a while and always felt like something was missing. Now I know: it's the lack of daily life moments! 😂
I'm hoping to see the protagonist smash the dominating witch to death; I'd freaking give it a million magnetic pulls!
The plot is being pushed too fast, and the characters' emotional arcs aren't being fleshed out or solidified through daily life moments. This is essentially cutting corners and will cause the story to fall apart later. I suggest adding two to three chapters of daily life at the end of each chapter, or if you're confident in your writing skills, you could try interspersing daily life scenes. [Sfem:4:334]
Hooray for the ending! It's great. The theme is very fresh, especially. However, the last part did feel a bit rushed. I hope the author can add more epilogues. Mainly, after reading so much depressing content, a little bit of happy, sweet moments is welcome.
Do you want them all?
The only drawback is the lack of a romance storyline. Author, please add more romance and make it more nuanced. That's my suggestion.