My Underworld and Law-Abiding Fiancée

There are only 130-odd days left until the postgraduate entrance exam. It's incredibly important to me, so I'll have to put it off for the next few months. I'll finish writing it later, and I promise I won't abandon it. I'm so sorry.

I've read the first few chapters and it seems pretty good. It's written more rationally than most of Pineapple Bun's novels, not the kind of boring "I'm awesome, I do whatever I want" kind. It also matches the author's initial promise to make readers happy. The opening was quite deliberate, using syllogisms and the law of universal gravitation—the metaphors were remarkably good! It seems the author is a well-read and interesting person! Keep up the good work, author! I believe in you!

I've started updating again since I finished my postgraduate entrance exam.

I personally think the author's writing style is decent, but the plot transitions, scene changes, and character development all have flaws. The plot doesn't need to move too fast; sometimes a slower pace makes it more enjoyable for the reader. The scenes, needless to say, need improvement. Character development is a crucial aspect of any book. While the author's writing is good, there's a significant deficiency in portraying the characters' psychology and emotional nuances. The author could refer to books with strong character descriptions; I believe this will greatly help and significantly improve the book. Keep it up!

I'll go first, I'm back from the dead!

I'll be posting a double update today to make up for yesterday's missed update on my book, "Welcome to Prison Academy." I hope everyone will add it to their favorites, like it, and give it a 10/10!

Hmmmm, the author seems like a very interesting and cultured person; their writing reflects their personality. The novel contains many classic scenes and dialogues that elevate its sophistication, yet the numerous everyday moments also make it feel relatable and avoid any awkwardness. This handling of relationships is excellent and a highlight of the novel, avoiding the typical "the weak are the strong" trope. However, the novel also has significant weaknesses. The character descriptions and psychological portrayals are somewhat lacking, and the battle scenes felt a bit monotonous and rushed (perhaps because it's primarily a slice-of-life novel). My personal opinion: I hope the author can add some darker elements...

Starting today, I will update every Saturday night, and I will post all the drafts I've accumulated this week. My free time is limited due to the postgraduate entrance exam in December, but I will still try my best to update. Please understand.

There's a chance that casting a monthly pass will trigger an effect: The author, feeling guilty, updated the page.

In February, I'll be updating daily. I'll add an extra chapter for every 50 monthly tickets or 5000 Fire Coins! Please support me!