I Fulfilled Their Wishes, and Now They're Coming After Me

It looks nice, but isn't it a bit too much for everyday life?

It's good. You clearly have a good grasp of pacing in short stories. Keep it up!

Guys, I did something really stupid. That second interlude was meant to supplement the plot of chapter 25. So here's the problem: I haven't even released chapter 25 yet. I'm numb. Am I a pig?

This book gave me a kind of beauty that doesn't belong to pineapple buns.

This is a masterpiece, let's start reading! Dude, I have over ten votes next month, I'll cast them all if you don't skip it. How many updates per day? Is there a group?

Is this a submission for a writing contest? It's surprisingly good! Much better than those body-transformation stories. The Western fantasy romance tag is also quite to my liking. Keep it up, author!

Your writing is great! It has the feel of the stories I read when I first started reading Pineapple Bun. Although they're still on my bookshelf, some stopped updating three or four years ago, and others are short stories that were hastily finished. You have to keep going! [E]

I feel the pacing is a bit too fast.

It looks great! I suggest you update it more often.

As a promising work with considerable potential, the only downside of this book is its rather bland plot. A traditional storyline doesn't mean it can't be brilliant, but the lack of detail significantly diminishes the reading experience. Some necessary metaphors (such as the deepening bond between the two characters, or the protagonist risking their life to withstand a fatal blow) should be given more screen time to enrich the content and develop the characters. The scenes that pass by too quickly make it difficult to create a truly impactful reading experience.