If I'd Known the Paranoid Girl Would Turn Evil, I Wouldn't Have Served Her

Even better

Don't die yet! Post a rough outline of the plot before you flop!

Hmm, I seem to be experiencing some writer's block, but the plot is still progressing.

It's uncomfortable

How about something more exciting? Like, Nuanyu has to capture a dragon for some reason, and then several factions try to use something to lure the dragon, only to find out in the end that it's their own Qiuyu. Just thinking about it is thrilling!

Actually, I think your harem novel has gotten a bit backwards. So far, the female lead with the most depth of character portrayal is Nuanyu. I've almost forgotten what the other female leads are like. Are you trying to develop it into a pure love story?

It feels like it's gradually moving towards a pure romance genre, doesn't it?

Isn't Qiu Yu the male lead in Gaia? This doesn't seem right.

Today's update is here!

The characters are vividly portrayed and very realistically depicted, to the point that seeing Sister Qing makes me angry; the psychological manipulation is so realistic, I'm already burning with rage. It feels like Sister Qing is purely using him, and she hasn't truly assessed his true place in her heart. When she's afraid that something will happen to her and her brother will suffer retaliation, her first instinct is to use someone else to entrust him to her. Why do I say "use" instead of "ask for help"? It's because she's afraid that if she returns safely, her brother will be taken away by someone else and she won't be able to get him back. It can only be said that this mother and son are born to manipulate each other. The environmental descriptions are also excellent, skillfully using the environment to subtly convey the characters' emotions or foreshadow future events. The control of the plot is also very good...