In the Beast Girl World, I Turned from Snake to Dragon

Keep going, don't become the next me.

I really like the author's character design; so far, it seems the author has a lot of ideas for character development, but isn't very good at crafting plots to further develop these characters. This makes some chapters feel like skipping them doesn't have a big impact. For example, the chapters about the Decade belt and Fast & Furious. In my experience, many books with this problem either struggle in the middle or seem unsure what to write, abruptly ending after 100-200 chapters. I hope this book can continue, so I'd like to offer my humble opinion, hoping it will be of some help: If the pressure to fill the gaps in content is put entirely on introducing new characters, although the early stages...

Please don't visit graves! The author is busy with other things lately, but will definitely update when there's time. Here's an update for today!

First, I think Chapter 1 is completely useless. The idea of time travel after death is so superficially mentioned—being injured by a truck and killed while saving someone is enough; it could easily be deleted. Out of 16 chapters, the protagonist only appears in 3, and even then, the protagonist is a soul-possessed individual, and we haven't even figured out their memories or current situation. In those 3 chapters, the protagonist hasn't even left their house, and you switch perspectives and write over ten chapters about a younger sister blaring about how painful and tragic it is to lose her older sister, and how she has news to find her—the subsequent developments are obvious. But with such a lack of focus, who is the protagonist? The protagonist hasn't even accepted their own identity yet, so how can you expect the reader to empathize? 13 out of 16 chapters are dedicated to the younger sister…

Being busy is good, being busy is good, just remember to update, please don't abandon the project! [Sfem:9:470]

By the way, the author's new book is expected to be released around the time of the autumn campaign; it's a Western fantasy romance with a love-hate relationship and sisterly bonds.

Hahaha, damn it! Shark had given so much to Hanql and stayed by his side for so long, yet Hanql took away her new love in just one day. No, although childhood sweethearts can't compete with sudden infatuation, you've only spent one day together and Hanql has already said: "Of course I love you the most." That's truly amazing. Shasha is the clown, Boiling Sheep, right?

Aminos

It has stopped updating.

Do you have to delete comments just for giving feedback? Look at how long it took to drag out the fight against that pig-man mayor. The official conflict was in chapter 80, and it wasn't until over 130 chapters that they actually fought the mayor. Over 50 chapters were just dragged out. A little plot with the pig's son along the way would have been fine, but it got even more drawn out later. Even the awakening of an ability took so long. Those two catgirl NTR scenes were definitely a landmine if they hadn't been revised. I don't understand whether it's a slice-of-life story interspersed with the main plot or the main plot interspersed with slice-of-life. One minute there's a ton of main plot, the next a long stretch of slice-of-life. Deleting comments for dragging out dozens of chapters is completely unnecessary. Without correcting these issues, the book's performance is poor...