How Can Even the Villain Be Raised by the Heroine?

Everyone understands that the sports-themed plot is missing, since it's a legitimate app, but where's the character development? And where's the romance? Look at all those tens of thousands of words you've written, what does it have to do with romance? Nobody likes Hojo Seiji, and Hojo doesn't like any of the female leads. If you don't create some opportunities for them to fall in love, the novel might just have to be abandoned.

The author is someone who can have an impact on the toilet paper industry.

After reading tens of thousands of words, I still can't see any nurturing or developmental plot. Every single female lead is terrified of Hojo Seiji; how can this be considered nurturing? If you want nurturing, at least you have to be unafraid of him! If the author doesn't quickly steer this off track back on track, I don't know when it will crash.

The male lead is too obedient; to put it nicely, he's docile; to put it bluntly, he's a puppet.

The author is Japanese, right? They seem to be working very hard at learning Chinese.

Isn't the real heroine Xiangzi? It feels like none of them are even remotely capable of fighting.

The real female lead is Xiangzi, right? The male lead almost always listens to Xiangzi. I don't know how the others manage to catch up with her.

Go at your own pace. If the guy downstairs wants a custom novel, he can write it himself. Letting readers customize the plot is going against the grain. Let's see how you write it next. (Already bookmarked.)

I'm only here for three things: urge for more updates, urge for more updates, and damn it, urge for more updates.

The plot has absolutely nothing to do with your title and synopsis; after reading for a while, I found nothing.