A Life of Cultivation That Began with Cross-Dressing Infiltration

It dragged on for too long. Not only did it take 100 chapters to change, but I also felt like I was stuck at home for ages. The writing was also quite bland, and the daily life was dull and felt like forced filler. Plus, the female lead was too strong, and the male lead followed a domineering path. The beginning was pretty good, but later the male lead became just a background character, which felt very out of place with his character.

Another point is that I feel the author has made a mistake. People come here to read about marriage transformation, to read about romance, or simply to read about cultivation. Why do we have to come here? Your theme is marriage transformation, and I've read over 100 chapters, and Li Xiuzhu has only appeared a few times. Aren't you just using marriage transformation as a cover to write about cultivation and trick people out of their money?

Sigh, I'm a bit disappointed. The enthusiasm I finally mustered yesterday has completely vanished today. It seems the author isn't very good at timing or understanding the readers' minds. You built up a story with 100 chapters of build-up, and finally it changed! Such a crucial traffic-generating moment, not before May Day, not during May Day, but at the end of May Day, when everyone's going home. Even so, normally, for such a crucial climax, any author with a bit of vision would have prepared in advance and released four or five chapters on the day of the change to satisfy readers' appetites. But our author, unchanging, released two chapters a day as usual. And these two new chapters...

To be honest, it gets progressively worse. It's a fake cultivation story disguised as martial arts, and the further you read, the more obvious it becomes that the book lacks structure and rigorous plot. Aside from padding the word count, there's nothing worth reading anymore. Subscribing to this point has been a complete waste of money.

Regardless, a large and satisfying job is a sign of conscience, far better than those who write 200,000 or 300,000 words and then run away.

First, the early stages are very interesting. Although the pace is slow, it doesn't feel drawn out, and even the transformation period feels natural, with clear foreshadowing in the early stages. However, there's a major flaw: it treats the characters like idiots. The female lead's idea of getting her family to cultivate immortality is a prime example. How does she do it? Answer: "First, she gives her maid the cultivation manuals and practices herself, then she tells her mother that cultivating immortality can grant eternal youth." This is truly toxic. The female lead is already a mid-sixth-grade immortal, which, based on the early setup, is already considered a low-level immortal. If she simply showed off her moonlight cultivation techniques to her family, they would likely become interested in cultivating immortality, not to mention the female lead has memorized several manuals...

In general This article is a must-read for readers of the "transformation" style. However, it's best to skim through it, getting through the basics, as the author occasionally makes a slip of the tongue.

I've read up to chapter 189. Here's a brief review: the plot is okay, but the content lacks logic, the power levels are inconsistent, the writing is poor, and it's mostly filler with unnecessary details and repetitive narration. In short, thankfully I have a lot of saved-up chapters, so it's readable enough.

Aside from having a water content exceeding the proportion of the human body, it's still pretty good.

Having read over a hundred chapters, all I keep remembering is that Jade Toad Palace is a famous bride-training school, and the protagonist spent five years cultivating a pseudo-emotional persona. They really know how to pad out the story!