As a Snake Demon, I Just Want to Stay Away from the Phoenix-Arrogant Immortal Maiden

Like many books that start strong but decline in quality, this one is quite interesting at the beginning. However, when it comes to adding settings and expanding the plot, it rambles on about other people's stories and their life philosophies and values. It doesn't advance the plot or provide any sweet moments. Sometimes it even includes NTR elements within a pure romance story or marriage scenes within a yuri story, which feels jarring and abrupt. I think many people, like me, probably don't like complicated plots and just want a lighthearted yuri read.

Personally, I feel that the plot after the character's transformation is indeed worse than before. I suggest the author carefully consider the plot and not rush it.

I strongly suggest that the author include systematic questions in the introduction or pinned comments; otherwise, they'll easily get bombarded with criticism on Pineapple Bun these days.

The beginning was fine before the character transformed. But the plot became strange after they were separated from each other in the Demon Realm. Even if it's a sweet and cute story, it shouldn't be this idiotic.

I couldn't bear to watch chapter 91 anymore. Why not just let the storyline about Master Huang go and have his daughter help the White Snake instead? Why did they have to arrange for someone to plead for him? Does his betrayal of outsiders have anything to do with his kindness to his own people? Also, chapter 90 used that padding method twice, which really made it unpleasant to watch (purely my personal opinion).

It was alright at first, but it got low later on. Starting from the Demon Realm, the plot suddenly became bland and uninteresting. The Demon Heart's idiotic actions—keeping the snake even when the person was about to leave—why? All they did was laugh at you! Someone wiped out your entire family with a sword, and you begged and pleaded for your life. Then, on the eve of your escape, you killed that clearly important pet that was wrapped around their neck. What was your gain? What benefit did you get? Just to vent your anger? If you wanted to vent your anger, why were you crying and begging in the first place? Just kill her! Isn't this just forcibly making things stupid to advance the plot? The logic is flawed. And...

To briefly discuss, this book has a good and novel theme (scientific fiction about animal transformation usually focuses on foxes, rarely snakes), and the portrayal of the characters' emotions and inner thoughts is excellent (Su Xiaoling's character is very well-developed; her independent, slightly neurotic personality from the protagonist's perspective, and her hazy love and attachment to the protagonist really resonated with me). However, the plot development isn't very well done, and the pacing feels rather rough and rushed (especially the part about entering the demon realm), with insufficient logical coherence. Also, one personal opinion: I quite enjoy reading about protagonists being reborn in non-human form, which is a great selling point, but the later transformations...

Personally speaking, you could portray Snake as a bit silly, but silly doesn't mean brainless, and kind doesn't mean saintly. Starting with the paid chapters, I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels something's off about various details and plot points; it really needs more polishing.

I can't even write about drooling; it's seriously hindering my performance.

Seriously, this is disgusting! A new character just steals the clothes meant for the female lead like that?