Reborn as a Little Girl, but Living on the Streets

As a relatively realistic light novel, it feels more like a compilation of short stories from the 1990s. Although the writing is somewhat rough, it depicts a world that is both cold and warm. Seeing this kind of work on Pineapple Bun is... A bit surprising?

The author's writing is excellent, realistic, and very moving 👍🏻, but I have to complain about the plot. The protagonist shrunk, but he's not stupid. Don't high school students these days learn from their mistakes? Also, the characters seem to never explain themselves, leading to so many misunderstandings 😭. After spending so much time with that old man surnamed Zeng, the protagonist never even thought to listen to him properly or explain why he was being asked to leave. It feels like the protagonist is often too hasty, and there's also the issue of his attitude. If he hadn't been so naive when explaining to the police, the outcome might have been different, and the police might have trusted him more. I hope the author can...

This is the only book on Pineapple Bun that I'm willing to keep reading. I didn't delete Pineapple Bun just to read this one. Keep up the good work, author! (I've been reading it for almost two years.)

I got tired of reading "transformation" stories and picked up this one. The beginning is quite depressing, but still within acceptable limits. I read it from evening until dawn. The author portrays the protagonist as a rebellious 16-year-old, choosing to wander alone despite the various people she meets who could lead her to her destination. We've reached the scene in the shopping mall; it's time for some sweetness. I hope the author doesn't give the protagonist too many angst and allows her a happy ending! Author, hurry up! I support you!!!

Will the three of them eventually become a family?

Seeing that this book didn't have a 2025 review, I thought I'd write one. I've already finished reading the whole book, followed up to chapter 521, and even joined the ranks of those urging for more updates, so I still feel qualified to comment. First, I have some small opinions and speculations. I know the author is very busy and used voice input, which is why there are so many typos and grammatical errors in the book, and I have to guess them, especially the part about Su An'an and Tang Ge's wanderings. This is the first time I've ever encountered such rough writing. So I'd like the author to leave a message after the grammatical errors. I'm not sure if Pineapple Bun (a popular online bookstore chain) can remove previous chapters and then repost them. If so, I hope the author can find some time to correct them...

I'm getting a bit overwhelmed. Even the latest chapter is frustrating to read. I'll subscribe to the whole book to read it later when I feel better. Otherwise, my phone can't handle this. I've already thrown my phone away several times after reading a little over half.

I've opened this book several times, but each time I couldn't bring myself to continue after the first volume ended. Then, on the Lantern Festival, I saw it again and this time I read it all night long. It's a wonderful story; the main character is so adorable and so heartbreaking. I hope the author can give us a complete story. Finally, please update quickly! I can't sleep at night. Author, are you even sleeping? Please update soon! (((φ(◎ロ◎;)φ)))

This work has quite a few flaws. Typos somewhat detract from the reading experience, and the character development is illogical. Wang Jian, the policeman, really doesn't seem like a policeman. The author has stated that the police in the story aren't as reliable as real-life policemen; otherwise, I might think the author is a genius (laughs). Of course, that's probably not actually the case; the author likely wrote it that way to advance the plot. On the positive side, the writing style is decent for this book, at a mid-tier level. Its realistic subject matter is also its unique feature. Most importantly, although the pacing of the plot isn't excellent, you can see the effort the author put into the plot's conception, making the reader eager to see more...

Pineapple Bun (a fictional author) doesn't produce many realistic stories like this anymore. Up to chapter 54, the plot development is reasonable, and the character portrayals are quite good. More effort could be put into the environmental elements to better enrich the characters and avoid making them monotonous, one-dimensional figures. I think the parts reflecting real society need improvement. It doesn't need to directly depict the darkness of society; trying some metaphors and satire, hiding dark humor within the imagery, might be better. I once saw a scene about forced demolition in Yu Hua's *The Seventh Day*, where Yu Hua first sets the tone, then uses subtle hints...