Raising Monster Girls from Scratch

Hello everyone, I'm Tian Jia Shao Xian Yue, a lazy bum who's been courting death in May. Today I'm bringing you a book review of *Raising a Monster Girl from Zero*. Let's cut to the chase and get straight to my thoughts on this book. The title is *Raising a Monster Girl from Zero*, and frankly, after reading just the first two chapters, I understood the book's genre: a fairly traditional fantasy battle novel. Generally, I categorize a work as traditional fantasy because the author hasn't broken free from a common fantasy novel framework and is constrained by the relatively shallow...

Personally, I think the author could try to describe the changes in the character's movements in more detail, from subtle small movements to the starting point of force, the stiffness after the movement, the follow-up, the withdrawal, and so on. Think carefully about human anatomy; you can watch relevant documentaries and try to imagine yourself in the character's shoes. Most importantly, write it in a way that makes it look cool. For example: …Staring at the trajectory of the dagger, the speed was so fast that the brain hadn't even processed it, but based on the body's fighting instincts, the body leaned back slightly, and the right foot pulled back half a step. Hiss, the clothes were slashed open at the same time…

1. No girls can die! No girls can die... I'll say it three times because it's important. In the current commercial market [Note: the following is my personal opinion], besides using light novel plots that are easy to read [Light novels: works suitable for young boys and girls to read easily, youthful and invincible, plot style similar to "Heaven's Lost Property" harem anime], heavy plots can die! Youthful invincibility is the right way. Good light novel works, besides having a relatively reasonable setting and plot development, here's the key point: an overall relatively light reading style [Counter-example: traveling to another world with a smartphone, Japanese influence is too strong], preferably a group of young people under an adventurous surgical...

This book is a complex story. I don't know how to express it. It feels like I've been holding it in for a long time and then suddenly forgot the words. Sigh. Okay. I'll just write something based on my personal feelings. After all, I have a feeling that I have to get it off my chest. First of all, the title is "I caught a new monster girl". Hmm. It feels like watching a Pokémon game. I know, I know. Most people are fooled by the synopsis. To be honest, the first part doesn't seem to have much of a daily life feel. The chapters in the middle of the battle are just written to trigger the next battle. It feels like it's just to ensure logical coherence. In other words, it's almost...

Commentator: Karen Title: A work with a solid style and outstanding highlights, but it feels like something is missing. Summary: Only by fully refining and applying one's chosen material can a work become truly outstanding. Suitable for: Authors who don't know how to enrich and develop a thin plot. Word count: 2209 Reading time: Approximately 3 minutes Hmm, everyone, this is Karen's late-night review—from Kaze no Gen's *Re: Zero - Monster Girl Raising*. Monster girls are usually composed of all organic or inorganic matter, as well as fictional beings, excluding humans...

This ending is missing something, okay? I hope you can give me a real ending, thank you (⑉• •⑉)‥♡

There's too much verbose dialogue; please provide more details during the battle breaks. For example, I saw a Gold-rank adventurer with beads of sweat the size of soybeans on his forehead… Also, the class system is too vague, and the general system is too strange. Please provide a detailed explanation of the world and its systems. That's all I know. Again, please provide more details during battles so I can better visualize the events…

To share this book, which I think is pretty good, and to prevent newbies from dropping it after the first few chapters, I, as a newbie myself, am writing down my personal opinions below. Well, these are just my personal opinions, for reference only. Please don't be too harsh if you disagree. If the author thinks it's good, they should just mention it in the introduction. First, let's move on to the book review section. Welcome to all the experienced readers who have something to say; feel free to comment and correct below. Now, let's begin! If you're reading the first part, and you're only reading the synopsis, then... Well, wishing you a pleasant experience before you leave is not quite right. Anyway, I dropped it halfway through (maybe it's the author's debut work, so the early parts were a bit messy...).

How rare... Where did you go sightseeing?

Calvin