It Was Supposed to Be a Deal, So Why Are You Trying to Use It to Climb the Ranks?

To be honest, after reading a few chapters, I don't understand what's so appealing about the male lead. Compared to those dazzling young ladies, he really doesn't seem to be a good match. At first, I didn't think much of it, but now it just feels like a loser's wishful thinking (no offense to anyone).

The biggest problem with this book right now is that, given the male lead's devoted and loyal character, Luo's progress is just too fast. They like each other, have sex, graduate and get married. In this situation, wanting a harem can only mean that the male lead's character has collapsed, or that Luo has run into problems and is now pursuing her husband. The relationship between Luo and the male lead shouldn't be written so aggressively; otherwise, no one else can get involved.

I'm done with it. The proportion of Luo is ridiculously high. It doesn't seem like a harem at all. Anyway, I don't want to find out in the end that it's some kind of stock market manipulation with only one female lead. I can watch a 1v1 story with only one female lead, but only if the female lead is the only person the protagonist is connected to. Aside from that, any other single-female-lead story (especially those about stock trading) would only make me decide that the protagonist is a social scumbag who ruins a good woman's life. After all, if you're not going to marry her, why flirt with her? If you don't like her, just shut her down.

To be honest, I've seen female leads fawn over male supporting characters and end up falling for the male lead, and those do have their moments of satisfaction. But I've rarely seen such excessive fawning. Even the male supporting character describes the female lead as a lapdog who comes wagging its tail and begging for mercy at his mere mention. That's really going too far.

Dear author, I had the privilege of reading this novel yesterday, which was very meaningful to me. Unfortunately, I don't have much time left. However, tonight the doctor told me that if the author (Mengyi Qingyin) can update five times a day, this illness might be treatable. Therefore, I want to beg you, I want to live, could you please try your best for me, this insignificant little citizen? [Em: sfgirl:0]

One day, God said to me, "Child, I can grant you one wish. What do you want?" I said, "Can you destroy the Earth?" God said, "Child, think about something else first!" I said, "How about making this author write fifteen articles a day?" God said, "Child, let's think about destroying the Earth instead!"

Dear author, tomorrow is my wedding day with my wife. Recently, my wife has become obsessed with a novel and often can't sleep at night because of the lack of updates. However, she is also pregnant. So, could you please update more frequently? On behalf of my wife and child, thank you!

Dear author, this account belongs to my son. He's a senior in high school, under immense pressure from the college entrance exam. He's become increasingly quiet and withdrawn, and doesn't communicate with me much. These past few days, I've noticed he smiles while reading this novel. So, author, could you please, for the sake of a poor father who just wants to cheer his child up, update ten chapters a day?

The easiest genre to write is pure romance. If a female lead has intimate contact with other men, that implies NTR (Netorare) tendencies. You either need to revise it or rewrite it as pure romance.

Oh, the female lead smokes? ... It's fine in a fantasy world, but since she's just a mortal, her breath will smell terrible.