The Sucker Villain Has Stopped Loving: Feng Aotian, Get Lost

Author, who are you? The Guinness World Record is 807 letters per minute. Assuming each Chinese character requires six letters, that's about 134 words per minute. Since you're not the record holder, let's assume 100 words per minute. According to the World Health Organization, a healthy person needs eight hours of sleep. You spend about two hours eating, 20 minutes on the toilet, 40 minutes washing up, one hour exercising, two hours for inspiration, and then subtract one hour for daydreaming or slacking off. You should have nine hours to type, which would amount to 435,780 words. Assuming each chapter is 2000 words...

Even with all the top posts, nobody's here. Sigh, I've already released three chapters, isn't anyone going to give me a monthly pass as a token of appreciation?

After meeting Su Qingqiu, the plot began to fall apart, and the character development became distorted. 1. The plot became chaotic, and the main and secondary elements were no longer clearly distinguishable. The book began to follow the principle of avoiding the past life route of rebirth, so the main storyline focused on the protagonist gradually interacting with female characters and creating bonds, with each character's past life story being revealed alternately. This arrangement was quite good, with a good balance of pacing. Furthermore, the earlier part of the plot was supported by An Bai's bond with his master in this life, driven by An Bai's desire to stay with his master forever. However, when most of the characters in the book surfaced, especially after the plot involving the two foxes, the story completely collapsed. An Bai...

It's rare to see a work like this that you can maintain interest throughout. It's designed to be mindless, guiding you through the entire story, showing you what's fun and exciting, and then providing some background and world-building to give you a general understanding of the book's world. The plot is quite engaging, with frequent jokes and breaking down dimensional barriers to keep things fresh. The protagonist, An Bai, is a homophone for "bai" (摆), meaning to be unreliable but principled, leaving a very positive impression. His victimhood makes him surprisingly endearing. It seems like a harem story, and given the readers' preferences, it's bound to be...

It probably hasn't been sent yet. I'll urge you guys to update it next time I play the game. If it's not updated, I'm leaving.

I read from the first chapter to the end, and it felt very smooth. It's rare to see a story like this; overall, it's much better than a newbie's work. Mastering ancient Chinese style requires skill, and the author's plot control is excellent, the character design is good, and it will be even better if it doesn't go out of character later. Its strengths are that it's much better than previous stories with the "slacking off" theme; it's not just simple laziness, the pacing of the plot is very good, and it doesn't feel monotonous. Little Master, Su Qianqiu's flashbacks are also very rich, making it one of the better stories recently. I wonder if the author has read Ji Da's "Ask the Mortal World," because the Qian Yuan Tai Qing system, plus the Cheng Huang, feels a bit familiar...

Damn it, I need to find a way to resume updating both books, otherwise I'll be stuck if I can't finish either one. I'm really frustrated right now.

Wow, they've left so many unfinished projects! I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next in that Demon King story, but unfortunately, that's not the author's priority.

I love my little master so much! If anything happens to him, I'll teleport there and give the author a good scolding! 😡

Happy New Year to everyone!