As a Supporting Character, I Adopted the Villainess!

I feel that we could actually be nicer to Celine.

This isn't just about flaws and plot holes; author, did you even consider the logic when writing this book? This is the first time I've seriously criticized a book like this. Let's start with the power system. The protagonist is at the peak of his tribulation, right? He's forced to reveal his trump card by a minor character who's a whole level below him. Does that make sense? Let's not even mention the opening line, "In this city, if I don't want to, even if you demon lords come, you won't be able to touch me" (that's roughly the gist of the quote). Then, a minor character suddenly resurrects, eats the corpse of someone nearby, and instantly kills the protagonist. Even if the protagonist used a sword immortal's ultimate move to weaken himself, this still doesn't make any sense...

Well, I've read quite a few novels of this type, like system novels and romance novels. I think it's best not to use a system-based favorability system to represent affection, especially in novels with romance as the main theme. To write nuanced emotions, I feel you need to rely on details and indirect descriptions. The author's writing is quite good, but it feels somewhat inexperienced. If you use a system to represent a character's emotional issues, it simplifies the emotions and fails to showcase the contradictions within them, which is quite fatal. A system can be included, but it's best not to make it too prominent; it should serve as a plot device or a tool for advancing the plot and becoming stronger...

Hu Tao... Back in the day, after the beginner's ten-pull, I couldn't resist spending money on ten more pulls, and that's how I got Hu Tao.

I have a feeling that Gu Qingge and Yan Xilin should continue to treat each other like daughters, preventing their familial bond from deteriorating. I also think it's better to reject childish aesthetics and let Aunt Duan and Uncle Yan make do.

Sirin, is your inspiration the Herrscher of the Void?

The beginning was just so-so, but now that Sirin has appeared, it feels completely different. She directly reveals the protagonist's true personality from a different angle. I hope they'll focus more on developing Sirin's character.

To be honest, there were many parts of the book that I didn't understand. The title is "Ancient Style," but the content includes words like "shopping mall," "barbershop," and "luxury chairs." Frankly, when these kinds of words appear, it's hard to immerse oneself in the book. It seems like ancient style, yet it's not; it seems like cultivation, yet it's not; it feels like a combination of a fantasy world and reality. Every time I encounter such words, I feel awkward, and most importantly, it's difficult to get into the book.

Everything was fine until they were fighting off some minor enemies, and it turned into this mess. It's just ridiculous. Playing with references is one thing, but this is another. Even if the main character is a bit cheeky, it's fine, but having to force a female lead to turn evil is just too much. And this is the result? It's pathetic. The male lead looks like a clown throughout the entire battle. It's like eating a sweet treat only to find a pile of crap inside. At first, I liked the minor flaws, and the main body was great, so I could accept it, but this later on... I can only say no. It's disgusting.

When will we see Yan Xifeng being used as a weapon by Gu Qingge?