After Turning into a Beautiful Girl, I'm Doted on by Everyone

The first time he lost his virginity felt rushed, and it wasn't the older sister's that made me feel awkward. It was obvious the older sister cared more about the protagonist, while Orange seemed more interested in his body. I didn't see much of a romantic relationship before the protagonist inexplicably lost his virginity, which completely confused me.

If the older sister had gotten the first prize, the book's collection, monthly tickets, and rewards would have increased even further. Not everyone is into NTR; most are still fans of pure love. It's truly disheartening that the older sister, who cares so much, didn't get the first prize. Orange got the first prize, which is incredibly arrogant, and she even succeeded. I can only say this is the book's fate. If the older sister had been number one, this book would have been a legend, but now... It's plummeted. Victory or defeat often hinges on a single thought.

As I was raising the pet, I realized something was wrong; how did Orange get the first blood again? No matter how you look at it, the older sister is more suitable and deserving to be the main wife. It's so unfair that such a gentle and considerate older sister was taken by the villain. I quite like the author's writing style, but this is a fatal flaw for me. I'll wait for the author's next book.

1. Regardless of who it is, at least the emotional groundwork should be laid well. We're not the author and don't know the unwritten details. 2. To be honest, Orange's character description is a bit vague. From her first appearance, she gives us the impression that she'll give us 200,000 in rewards if we like her. The romance is glossed over; they met online for several years, then she gives him 200,000, and we're expected to like her just because of that? Could you have written it in more detail? For example, Orange's encouragement and help when Fox's drawing skills weren't yet proficient—you didn't write any of that, just glossed it over. 3. The excessive romantic scenes with her sister earlier in the story give the impression that her sister is the main love interest. If it were in your order...

Please stop writing about the older sister and other men, especially the group of people egging her on as if it were real. It's really upsetting to see this in a yuri story.

I'm wondering if vanilla can really turn into a catgirl?

Well written, keep it up!

To be honest, there's nothing wrong with the female lead and Orange, but this makes the earlier scenes set in the late Qing Dynasty feel particularly stifling. I might be saying something unpleasant, but it really has a strong sense of arrogance.

Chapter Nine has been sent.

It's pretty good, but as someone who's into older women, it was a total disaster QAQ, but I'll still keep watching.