I Was Transformed into a Girl

First, let me start with the strengths. The author has many ideas and a lot of imagination, so it's not too boring. Some aspects are handled well, such as the relationships between characters, maintaining a good balance among the girls in the harem to prevent things from getting out of control. While yuri harem is a relatively novel theme, it's something that can't exist in reality, so it's best to write it in a lighthearted and humorous way. Now for the weaknesses: the logical relationships are poorly handled, and many plot holes remain unfilled, seemingly to be filled later. The daily timeline is too long, with inconsistencies in transitions and cuts. So far, I still don't know what the author is specifically trying to write... It seems like...

First of all, I'm quite familiar with gender-swap novels. They basically follow two tropes: gender reassignment to a lesbian relationship or gender remarriage. Some of the author's tropes are quite good, while others have logical flaws, perhaps due to untimely resolution of plot holes. Let's talk about the writing style first. From the language, I can roughly tell that the author is well-educated and has at least a certain literary foundation; otherwise, it wouldn't be easy to continue writing so much. The flaw in this aspect is that the narrative style and essay style are somewhat confused, with a lot of subjective thought in the writing. Sometimes it's not necessarily an omniscient perspective, but of course, this isn't necessarily a major flaw...

Now your novel has been flagged as a yuri story and rejected by yuri fans, are you happy? And getting blacklisted feels good, right? Don't just use yuri to fool people in the future; your credibility will eventually suffer. If you want to appeal to everyone, then go for it; if you want a harem, then go for it, but don't go overboard with the fancy stuff. It makes you, the author, get chased and cursed. Learn your lesson. I didn't really want to say all this, but you've tricked too many people. If it weren't for this warning post, I almost would have been poisoned. The beginning is terrible, and then suddenly something else pops up later—it's terrifying. For many people, this is pure fraud. So I made a post, and that's about it. Luckily, I'm relatively civilized and won't use profanity, otherwise there would be much more to say.

I think the author's plot is very well written, especially appealing to female fans of BL... Ah, no, especially to our current tastes. The writing is also very artistic, which I really like, and the imagination is boundless. However, I still hope the author will get Qinmu and Qiyao together; that would definitely be great! Also, I really hope the author will provide more fanservice, like Qiyao accidentally touching Qinmu's breasts, or Qiyao confessing to Qinmu, etc. And I hope every supporting character and main character will have a partner, preferably of the opposite sex, and that there will be a happy ending! Okay, lastly, a reminder to the author...

What happened to my cover?

I've written so much, I don't want to give it a low score right away, since some readers who don't mind might enjoy it (laughs). My only reason for disliking it is: the yuri tag has developed into a reverse marriage subplot!!! While you can choose to skip to the yuri route, the main story and subplots are both part of the book. You've already set the yuri tag, so what's the point of developing a reverse marriage subplot based on some people's opinions? You can create a yuri subplot, but why mix yuri and reverse marriage together? Do you know how it feels to see the later chapters? Like eating sweet and savory tofu pudding mixed together? Did you even consider the feelings of those who prefer only sweet or only savory tofu pudding? I've read many multi-route galgames...

My first book in the Pineapple Bun community, a little commemoration of my return.

Seeing comments downstairs about an ending where the character gets married, it seems I have no choice but to give up. I find the ending of getting married disgusting and repulsive. [I think I'm just arguing unnecessarily.]

Please be civil in your comments section. Thank you for your cooperation.

So, is it a lesbian relationship or marriage?